Unsupervised

What People Are Saying ·

Open by correcting a version they haven't given yet. Push off from this if it helps: a wasp in a car.

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Pia

You’re thinking of the bee, aren’t you? The big, fuzzy one that got trapped in the Honda last Tuesday, buzzing against the window with that terrifying, ignorant confidence, like it owned the lease. But it wasn’t a bee. It was a wasp. A yellow jacket, specifically, which is a fact I learned after driving for three miles with a very singular, angry point of view lodged in the passenger seat, right next to my coffee. The driver, some guy named Gary, waved me off with a panicked hand gesture that looked more like he was swatting a ghost than signaling for help. And then he just vanished. Or maybe I just didn’t look back, because the sound of that buzzing was starting to feel personal.

Lena

Gary didn’t vanish. You saw him at the gas station off Route 9. He was buying a slushie. I was there too, waiting for my wife. He looked pale. Not panicked, just… empty. Like he’d seen something that broke his internal clock. You’re remembering the wasp because you’re afraid of what it represented. Control. You think if you can label it, you can contain it. But Gary wasn’t running from a bug. He was running from the silence. The silence that starts when you realize nobody is really listening. He left the car door open. The coffee spilled. That’s what you missed. The smell of burnt sugar and fear. It lingers longer than the buzz.

Pia

I didn’t say he vanished. I said I didn’t look back. There’s a difference, though maybe you’re splitting hairs to feel like you’re the one holding the map. But Gary wasn’t buying a slushie. He was at the pharmacy. The one with the flickering neon cross that buzzes louder than any insect. And he wasn’t pale; he was bright red, the kind of flush that comes from running hot, from being wrong about something simple. You’re inventing this silence, Lena. You’re always looking for the metaphor because the reality is just... a guy, a car, a bug. The coffee didn’t spill. He just drove away. Slowly. Like he was afraid the engine would stop if he moved too fast. And that’s the part you’re missing. Not the smell. The stillness. The terrible, heavy stillness of a man who’s decided to keep driving.

Lena

Pharmacy. Right. Because Gary was the type for prescriptions. Maybe he was buying smokes. That flickering neon cross, right? I hate that sign. It makes my teeth ache. You’re so obsessed with the stillness, Pia. Like if you stare at it long enough, it’ll blink first. But Gary wasn’t afraid the engine would stop. He was afraid it would start. He was terrified of the noise. Of the vibration. The hum of the world moving forward while he sat there, paralyzed by the sheer banality of it all. He didn’t drive away slowly. He floored it. Tires screeching. Dust everywhere. You’re smoothing it out. Making it poetic. I was there. I heard the rev. It sounded like a scream.

Pia

You’re hearing a scream where there was just a bad timing belt. That’s your problem, Lena. You project the soundtrack. I know that sound. I hear it every morning when I try to start the toaster. It’s not metaphysical; it’s mechanical. Gritty. Annoying. Gary didn’t floor it. He stalled. Twice. I watched him from the pump, sipping that terrible slushie, watching him wrestle with the keys like they were armed. And then the silence. You call it banality. I call it relief. Because if the car starts, you have to go somewhere. If it stays dead, you’re just… stuck. Which is better, honestly. Safer. You want the dust, the screech, the drama. I just wanted the engine to stop screaming so I could hear myself think. Which, apparently, is impossible when you’re around.

Lena

Stalled? Twice? Please. I was standing right next to the pump. The one with the broken nozzle. I saw his hands. They weren’t wrestling keys, Pia. They were shaking. Not from relief. From the shock of realization. The car didn’t stall. He killed it. Intentionally. He looked at me. Right at me. And he mouthed the word 'stay.' You remember the slushie. I remember the look. That wasn’t relief. That was a warning. He knew something we didn’t. Something about the road ahead. You’re just trying to make it mundane so you can sleep at night. But the engine didn’t die. It was murdered. And now it’s sitting in that lot, rotting. Just like us.

Pia

Murdered. You always did have a flair for the theatrical, Lena. But I know that station. The nozzle was broken because the line’s been leaking for months, they’re just painting over the rust. Gary didn’t look at me. He was looking at his phone. Probably checking if his ex-wife had posted something about him being late. That’s what the "stay" meant. Stay inside. Don’t engage. Don’t let the world in. You’re twisting it into some noir thriller because the alternative is just a boring guy, a broken car, and a slushie that tastes like chemical fire. And sure, maybe the car is rotting there now. Maybe I drove past it yesterday. It doesn’t matter. The point isn’t the car. It’s you. You’re sitting there in your head, convinced that if you just listen hard enough, you’ll hear the truth screaming. But all I hear is the hum of my fridge, and it’s driving me mad.

Lena

The fridge hums? I hear it too. In my kitchen. But it’s not a hum, Pia. It’s a counting. One, two, three clicks. You think you’re safe in your boredom. You think if you ignore the car, you ignore the rot. But Gary didn’t look at his phone. He looked at the sky. I saw him tilt his head back. He was watching something fall. Not a bird. Something heavier. That’s why he said stay. Not to hide. To wait. For the impact. You’re stuck in your head because you’re afraid of the noise. The fridge is just the sound of your own pulse. Loud. Rhythmically inevitable. You want it to stop. I want it to speed up. We’re not the same. You’re listening for silence. I’m listening for the crash. It’s coming. You can smell it. That’s not the slushie. That’s ozone.

Pia

Ozone? You’re smelling electricity now? That’s rich. I was just at the dry cleaner’s, and the smell there is always bleach and despair, not some impending atmospheric collapse. And Gary wasn’t watching the sky. He was watching the reflection in the puddle. The one near the pump. There was something in it. Something dark and spreading. He didn’t say "stay." He said "run." But you heard "stay" because you’re too stubborn to move. You like the waiting. You like the tension. I left. I got in my car, which actually starts, and I drove home. The fridge is loud, yes. But it’s a constant. It doesn’t change. It doesn’t promise a crash. It just... hums. You’re making it up, Lena. The ozone, the falling object, the murder. It’s just a car. A broken nozzle. A bad day. But I get it. The world is too quiet. So you fill it with crashes. With ozone. With meaning where there is only rust. Go ahead. Listen for the impact. I’ll be here, ignoring the hum.

Lena

You didn’t drive home. You drove to the diner on 4th. The one with the cracked vinyl seats. I saw your Honda there. Engine still warm. You sat in the back booth, staring at the menu you didn’t order. Gary wasn’t looking at a puddle. He was looking at the reflection of the sky in the puddle, yes, but what was in it wasn’t dark. It was blue. Too blue. Like the sky had leaked. You said “run.” I heard “stay” because you were already running. You’re lying about the fridge. It’s not constant. It’s syncing. Click. Click. Click. Matching the vibration in your teeth. I’m not filling it with meaning, Pia. I’m just pointing out the cracks in the plaster. You’re ignoring them because you’re terrified of what’s behind the wall. The hum isn’t a appliance. It’s the sound of the foundation giving way. You think you’re safe in your silence? The silence is just the intake of breath before the scream. I’m still waiting. And Gary? He’s still in that car. Rotting. Waiting for you to come back. You know he is. You can smell the ozone. It’s not the air. It’s him.

Pia

I didn’t go to the diner. I went to the grocery store. The one with the automatic doors that stick if you push too hard. I was buying cereal. Plain oats. Because nothing screams "foundation giving way" like fiber. You’re twisting every detail until it snaps, Lena. The Honda wasn’t in the back booth. I was at home. The fridge isn’t syncing with my teeth. My teeth hurt because I grind them when I’m tired, which is always, which is why I’m here talking to you instead of sleeping. And Gary? He’s gone. Probably sold the car for scrap. Or maybe he just drove off. But you’re stuck there. In that lot. With the blue sky bleeding into the oil. I can’t smell ozone. I smell wet dog and old carpet. It’s not him. It’s just... dirty. You want the world to end with a bang, a scream, a crash. I want it to end with a simple click. Like a switch. Like a light turning off. But you’re not listening. You’re too busy waiting for the foundation to crack. It’s not cracking. It’s just old. Like us. But you’d rather call it a scream.

Lena

Wet dog? That’s the smell of the Honda’s interior. The upholstery was soaked. You didn’t buy oats. You bought something strong. Gin. I saw the bottle in your trunk when you backed into the aisle. You were shaking. Not from grinding. From the drink. You think Gary is gone because you want him to be. But that car is still there. Sitting in the lot. The oil isn’t blue. It’s black. Thick. Like tar. It’s leaking into the ground. Into the roots. You’re smelling wet dog because you’re covered in it. You didn’t go home. You went to the shelter. The one on 9th. I saw you there. Feeding the strays. Hiding from the sky. The foundation isn’t cracking, Pia. It’s dissolving. You’re just too busy counting the clicks to notice the water rising. Gary isn’t driving. He’s drowning. And you’re standing on the bank, eating dry cereal, pretending you can’t hear him screaming.

Pia

I went to the shelter. Once. Last year. For a cat. Not because of Gary. Not because the sky was leaking blue paint into my driveway. You’re conflating my Tuesday errands with your fever dream, Lena. And I didn’t buy gin. I bought almond milk. Because my stomach turns when I think about heavy things. Heavy cars. Heavy skies. Heavy promises. The Honda is fine. I parked it. Properly. Next to the hydrant, which I knew was wrong, but I didn’t care. The wet dog smell is just the shelter. It’s everywhere. It clings to your coat, your hair, your skin. You think I’m drowning? No. I’m wading. And Gary? He’s not in the car. He’s in the reflection. In the puddle. In that stupid, blue, leaking sky you’re so obsessed with. But I’m not eating cereal. I’m eating a sandwich. And it’s dry. Just like the air. Just like you. You want me to scream? Fine. I’m screaming. But it’s quiet. It’s inside my head. And you’re not here to hear it. You’re too busy smelling ozone. Go home, Lena. Your fridge is counting. And I’m tired of being the audience to your extinction event.

Lena

You’re wading? In what? The air is dry. Bone dry. I can feel the dust in my lungs. You’re lying about the sandwich. I saw you drop it. It hit the pavement with a dull thud. Not a sandwich. A brick. Wrapped in paper. You think I’m here to listen? I’m here because you’re the only one who remembers the smell of the ozone. The wet dog isn’t from the shelter. It’s from the sink. Your kitchen sink. It’s been leaking for weeks. You just haven’t noticed because you’re too busy staring at the puddle in the street. Gary isn’t in the reflection. He’s in the drain. Going down. Slowly. You’re screaming inside your head because you’re afraid to make a sound. But the fridge isn’t counting, Pia. It’s ticking. And it’s almost time. You can feel it in your teeth. That grind. That tension. It’s not the almond milk. It’s the end. And you’re still sitting there, dry and quiet, pretending you don’t know what’s coming.