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What People Are Saying ·

Start by asking whether they've heard, then tell them anyway. Push off from this if it helps: fog.

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Edie

Did you hear about the fog? Not the weather. The news. They’re saying it rolled in off the Atlantic, thick enough to chew, swallowing the highway. My boss said it’s a containment breach. Said the city sealed the bridges at dawn. I saw a car stuck on the overpass, lights blinking, just… gone. Vanished into white. I drove past it myself. Or did I? You remember that road, right? The one that cuts through the pines. It’s always been creepy. Now it’s just a void. You should be careful. Don’t go out there. What if you’re already in it?

Rafe

My god, Edie, you’re spiraling. The highway wasn’t sealed because of a breach. It was the T-bone on the on-ramp. Remember? The tow truck took three hours. I was stuck behind a dump truck for forty minutes. That “vanishing” car? Probably just a Hyundai that got hopped up on the curve. I’ve driven that pine cut a thousand times. It’s not a void, it’s just bad sightlines and no guardrails. You’ve been watching too much of that documentary on the atmospheric anomalies. Go to work. You’re late for the morning meeting, and don’t start quoting conspiracy forums to Sarah. She’s already tired of your “intuition.”

Edie

Right. The Hyundai. Of course. It was always a Hyundai. I’m sorry, Rafe, I’m so sorry. I forgot about the tow truck. God, I forgot about the dump truck. You’re right. I’m late. I have that meeting with the quarterly projections. Which, according to Sarah, I’ve been “interpreting” wrong again. She’s so tired of my intuition. I know. I’ll stop quoting the forums. I’ll just stare at the spreadsheet. But hey, at least the fog isn’t real. Just a car on a curve. A boring, beige Hyundai. I’ll be there in ten minutes. Don’t wait for me.

Rafe

Edie, wait. You’re making a scene in the parking lot. Again. Look, I didn’t say it was a fake Hyundai. I said it was a Hyundai. There’s a difference. You always do this—sweep the whole thing under the rug because it’s easier than admitting you’re spooked. The fog is weird, okay? My coffee shop on 4th had the blinds drawn all morning. Owner said the delivery guys wouldn’t come past the ridge. Maybe it’s not a breach. Maybe it’s just… damp. Heavy air. Go to your meeting. Fix your projections. But next time you see a car vanish, don’t just assume you’re crazy. Assume I’m wrong. I hate being the bore, Edie. I’m trying to help. Don’t slam the door.

Edie

Damp. Heavy air. You’re turning it into a weather report to feel better. The delivery guys wouldn’t come past the ridge? That’s not damp, Rafe. That’s fear. And I’m not slamming the door. I’m leaving it open because I need to see if you’ll actually look. Really look. At the road. At the white. It’s not just sightlines. It’s a wall. You’re the bore, sure. But you’re the one who remembers the dump truck. I remember the silence. The way the world just… stopped making sense for a second. That’s what I’m trying to say. You’re busy counting minutes. I’m counting breaths. Go fix your projections. I’ll handle the void. It’s nicer than Sarah anyway.

Rafe

Edie, stop. You’re scaring the barista. He’s looking at us like we’re selling something. The “silence” you hear is probably just the HVAC in your office humming too loud. You’ve been staring at those screens for twelve hours straight. Your eyes are dry, your mind is fraying. That’s not a metaphysical void; that’s caffeine withdrawal and isolation. I’m not the bore here, you’re the one painting poetry over a traffic jam. Go into that meeting. Nod at Sarah. Fix the numbers. The fog will lift by noon. It always does. And if it doesn’t? I’ll come pick you up. Just… don’t drive into the ridge. Please.

Edie

The barista isn’t looking at us. He’s looking at the stain on your shirt. The one from last night’s wine. You’re sweating, Rafe. Really sweating. That’s not caffeine withdrawal. That’s guilt. You knew the delivery guys were scared. You sent them away. I saw the invoice. Cancelled. Voided. “Atmospheric interference.” Who writes that? Who thinks that’s a valid reason to burn three hundred bucks? Your coffee shop is a front. For what? Hiding the fog? Or hiding what’s in it? You say it lifts by noon. But what if it’s already here? What if we’re just breathing it in, slow, drop by drop? I’m not driving. I’m walking. I want to see the trees. See if they’re still green. Or if they’re just white, too.

Rafe

Don’t start with the shirt stain. I spilled Merlot on the cuff. It’s dry. You’re projecting. The invoice was a joke, Edie. A refund for a ruined bag of beans. Atmospheric interference? That’s what the automated system printed when the scanner glitched. You’re reading into boilerplate text because you want a mystery. You always did hate the mundane. Fine. Walk. See the trees. But keep your head down. The pines are just pines. They’re shedding needles. It’s October. The ground is brown. You’re imagining the white because you’re tired. Go to the meeting. Sit down. Breathe normally. The fog doesn’t care about us. It’s just water. H2O. Stop making it a person.

Edie

H2O. Right. Just water. That’s why it tastes like copper in the back of my throat. And the pines? You say they’re just shedding. I see them stripped. Bare bones against that white. You’re so eager to reduce it. To make it small. Manageable. Like a spreadsheet error. But the air… it’s thick. It clings. You’re sweating again, Rafe. Just because you’re standing still. I’m walking because I need to feel the ground. Solid. Real. If it’s just water, why can’t I hear the road? Why is it so quiet? Even the birds are gone. You’re wrong. You’re so wrong. But I’ll sit in the meeting. I’ll nod. I’ll fix the numbers. Because if I don’t, you’ll win. And I hate letting you win. Even when you’re right. Especially then.

Rafe

Edie, please. You’re walking in circles in the parking lot. The birds aren’t gone; it’s just early. Or late. I lost track. The copper taste? Rust in the pipes. Old building. We talked about this. My place has that same metallic tang. I drink it every morning. It doesn’t mean the world is ending. It means we’re breathing hard. Stop holding your breath. It makes you dizzy. You think staying silent is a strategy? It’s just exhaustion. Go inside. Sit down. Sarah doesn’t care about your breathing. She cares about the Q3 report. Fix it. Then we’ll talk. Not here. Not while you’re pacing. Come on.

Edie

I’m not pacing. I’m standing still. You’re the one spinning. The copper taste isn’t rust. It’s blood. I bit my tongue. Hard. When I saw the tree line. It’s not early or late. It’s now. The gray is absolute. Sarah can wait. The report can rot. You say I’m holding my breath? I’m inhaling the void, Rafe. It tastes like ozone and old coins. You’re so desperate for the mundane. So terrified of the unknown. But here’s the thing: the birds are gone. I checked. I looked up. Nothing. Just white. And you’re worried about Q3 projections? While the sky collapses? You’re the bore. The great, dull anchor dragging us down into nothingness. Come with me. Just for a minute. Step off the pavement. Feel the damp. See if you can still tell the difference between your pulse and the wind.

Rafe

I can’t step off the pavement, Edie. I’m wearing loafers. They’re new. I bought them yesterday. If I go into that mud, they’re ruined. And I really needed them for the board review. You’re talking about a sky collapse. I’m talking about rent. About staying employed. About not becoming the crazy neighbor everyone avoids. You think I’m afraid of the unknown? No. I’m afraid of being wrong about the weather. It’s simpler than that. Look. The white is just white. It’s high humidity. Condensation on the asphalt. That’s it. Go to the meeting. I have to get to my shift. The shop needs opening. I can’t just… leave. Stop looking at me like that. I’m tired. Just go. Please.

Edie

Loafers. You’re worried about loafers while the world dissolves? You’re obsessed with the surface. The shine. The rent. The board review. It’s pathetic, Rafe. Really. You’d trade existence for leather polish. I saw the mud. It wasn’t brown. It was white. Like the fog. It was eating the pavement. But sure, keep your shoes clean. Keep them pristine. While I walk into the gray. You say you’re tired. I’m terrified. And you’re still talking about condensation. On asphalt. Because if it’s just water, you don’t have to look at what’s hiding in it. Go open your shop. Burn the coffee. Shout at the beans. I’m going to find the edge. Even if you’re standing right there, dry and dry-eyed, watching me walk off the edge of your carefully curated reality. Don’t wave.

Rafe

Edie, stop. You’re scaring the barista. He’s looking at us like we’re selling something. The “silence” you hear is probably just the HVAC in your office humming too loud. You’ve been staring at those screens for twelve hours straight. Your eyes are dry, your mind is fraying. That’s not a metaphysical void; that’s caffeine withdrawal and isolation. I’m not the bore here, you’re the one painting poetry over a traffic jam. Go into that meeting. Nod at Sarah. Fix the numbers. The fog will lift by noon. It always does. And if it doesn’t? I’ll come pick you up. Just… don’t drive into the ridge. Please.

Edie

Your loafers are already ruined. I saw the white sludge on your soles when you stepped out. You didn’t notice? Or did you just wipe them off? “H2O.” Right. Just water. But water doesn’t cling to your eyelashes like that. I see it. And you’re wrong about the birds. They aren’t early. They’re gone. The ones on the line? Gone. Replaced by static. You say the fog lifts by noon. I checked the weather app. It’s gray. Forever gray. No sun. Just that thick, wet curtain. You’re scared, Rafe. Not of the unknown. Of being seen. Of me seeing you. The copper taste is fear. Not rust. Go to your shop. Burn the beans. I’m walking into the ridge. If you come, bring your loafers. They’ll be muddy soon enough.

Rafe

My soles are dry. I checked. You’re imagining the sludge. Or maybe it’s just the wet pavement reflecting the gray. You’re twisting everything. The static? That’s the power lines humming. High voltage, windy day. I hear it every morning on 4th. The weather app is glitching. It happens. I saw the update. Servers are down in the county. Don’t read into it. You’re exhausted, Edie. You’ve been up since three. I saw your car idling outside the house last night. Headlights on. Just staring at the wall. Go inside. Sit down. Drink some water. Not the copper one. Tap water. I’ll bring you a muffin. Blueberry. Your favorite. Just… stop walking toward the ridge. It’s just trees. Please.

Edie

You were idling? At three? With the lights on? I thought I was the one losing it. You’re watching me. Stalking my car. “Staring at the wall.” I was watching the fog roll in. Thicker than you admit. And the muffin? Blueberry. You remember that. You pay attention to the small things. The shoes. The muffins. The numbers. Ignoring the big thing. The gray. The silent hum. You say it’s power lines. I say it’s breath. Your breath, coming from the ridge. You’re trying to buy me off with berries while the world goes white. Don’t bring the muffin. Don’t bring the water. Bring the truth. Admit you saw it too. Admit the trees are gone. Or keep lying. Keep drinking your tap water. I’m walking closer. Closer. You can’t buy me off anymore, Rafe. Not with blueberries. Not with anything.

Rafe

I wasn’t stalking you, Edie. I was trying to find you. You left your keys on the counter. I didn’t want to leave them there. That’s not weird. That’s basic neighborly stuff. And I didn’t see the trees go. I saw the fence. It’s still there. I walked past it this morning to get the paper. The paper is wet. That’s all. You’re twisting my concern into voyeurism because it’s easier than admitting you’re scared of being alone in the gray. I’m not buying you off. I’m trying to keep you from walking into traffic. Or a ditch. Or whatever imaginary void you’re chasing. Stop. Just stop. Look at me. Really look. I’m right here. I’m not the fog. I’m Rafe. I have loafers. And I’m afraid. Scared you’ll walk into that ridge and never come back. Is that so hard to believe?

Edie

You walked past the fence? On 4th? The one with the broken latch? I drove past that route this morning. It’s flooded. Three feet of water. You would have been swimming. You’re lying. You didn’t walk past it. You couldn’t. Because there’s no paper. There’s no fence. There’s just the white. And you’re terrified. Not of the ditch. Of the silence. Of me leaving. You want me to look at you? Fine. Look. I see the sweat on your neck. I see the trembling in your hands. You’re not afraid I’ll get lost. You’re afraid I’ll find something you can’t fix with a muffin or a loaner key. You’re not Rafe. You’re just another person standing in the fog, pretending the world is solid. I’m not looking at you. I’m looking through you. Behind the loafers. Behind the fear. Into the gray. Where the real things are. Where you’re not hiding.

Rafe

I didn’t swim. I took the back way. Through the old mill parking lot. It’s dry there. High ground. You’re mixing up the routes. The mill has been closed for years, remember? The pavement’s cracked. I stepped over the weeds. I’m not hiding, Edie. I’m trying to keep us sane. You think I don’t see the white? I see it. It’s just white. It’s not a place. It’s not a person. It’s weather. Stop treating me like I’m the enemy. I’m holding the line. If you walk into that ridge, you’re gone. Not metaphorically. Physically. And I don’t know how to bring you back. So stop looking through me. Look at my face. See the sweat. It’s just heat. Please. Just come back to the shop. I’ll make you tea. Real tea. Not this metallic water. Come home.

Edie

The mill parking lot is underwater. I know. I drove by. The water was up to the tires. You said you stepped over weeds? In the flood? You’re lying. Again. You think I’m the enemy? You’re the one holding the line against reality. “Just heat.” Your face isn’t red from heat. It’s pale. Ashen. The white is inside you, Rafe. You’re breathing it in. I can see it in your eyes. Empty. Hollow. You want tea? Real tea? From where? The shop is empty. The blinds are drawn. No lights. No steam. Just cold porcelain. You’re not holding me back. You’re holding yourself together. And it’s cracking. I’m not coming home. There is no home. Just the ridge. And the silence. And the way you look at me like I’m a broken thing you can fix with words. I’m not broken. I’m awake. And you’re still sleeping.

Rafe

The mill’s on a hill, Edie. The water’s in the lot, not the road. You’re confusing the access ramp with the main drive. I walked the ridge path. It’s dry. I picked up the paper. It’s wet but the ink’s fine. You’re saying the shop’s empty because you haven’t looked since dawn. I’m here. The blinds are up. The espresso machine is hissing. It’s loud. It’s real. You think I’m ash? I’m just tired. My eyes are red from the steam. Stop dissecting me. I’m not cracking. I’m standing. And you’re standing there, talking to a ghost you created because the real world is too boring to bear. Go to the shop. Sit in the back. I’ll pour the coffee. Black. No sugar. Just like you like it. Come on. The fog isn’t eating us. It’s just weather. Stop making it a god.

Edie

The espresso machine hissing? That’s not steam. That’s a scream. I can hear it from here. Through the fog. It’s not loud, Rafe. It’s piercing. You say the ink’s fine on the wet paper. But what does it say? “Buy one get one free”? No. It’s blank. You’re holding a blank sheet. You’re pretending to read it. Just like you pretend the mill is dry. Just like you pretend I’m crazy. I’m not making it a god. I’m acknowledging it. It’s alive. And it’s watching us. The blinds are up? I saw them. They’re taped shut. With newspaper. Your newspaper. The blank one. You’re not tired. You’re terrified. Of the silence. Of the void. Come on. Let me in. Or don’t. But don’t lie about the coffee. Don’t lie about the fog. It’s not weather. It’s judgment. And you’re guilty.

Rafe

Edie, stop. You’re scaring the barista. He’s looking at us like we’re selling something. The “silence” you hear is probably just the HVAC in your office humming too loud. You’ve been staring at those screens for twelve hours straight. Your eyes are dry, your mind is fraying. That’s not a metaphysical void; that’s caffeine withdrawal and isolation. I’m not the bore here, you’re the one painting poetry over a traffic jam. Go into that meeting. Nod at Sarah. Fix the numbers. The fog will lift by noon. It always does. And if it doesn’t? I’ll come pick you up. Just… don’t drive into the ridge. Please.

Edie

You’re repeating yourself. “Noon.” “Lifts.” It’s a script. A desperate, brittle script. The barista isn’t looking at us. He’s looking at your hands. They’re shaking. Badly. You say it’s the steam? No. It’s the fear. The copper taste? It’s not rust. It’s blood from your gums. You’re grinding your teeth. You’re afraid. Not of the fog. Of me. Of what I see. You want me to fix the numbers? Fine. But don’t pretend you don’t know what’s out there. Don’t pretend the silence isn’t heavy. It’s pressing against the glass. You said “pick you up.” You can’t drive. The roads are gone. Just white. You’re offering me a way out of a place that doesn’t exist anymore. Go to your shop. Open the blinds. Let the light in. See if it burns. Or if it just fades. I’m not coming to the meeting. I’m staying here. With the truth. However ugly it is.

Rafe

My hands aren’t shaking. They’re cold. It’s drafty in here. The window’s cracked. You’re imagining the blood. I brushed my teeth this morning. Flossed. You’re projecting your own numbness onto me. The roads aren’t gone. I just didn’t check the map this morning. Maybe the bridge is out. Maybe it’s not. I don’t know. I’m tired, Edie. I’m so tired of fighting your ghosts. You want the truth? The truth is I’m scared. Scared that if I let you walk into that white, I’ll be alone. And I don’t know how to be alone. The shop is open. The blinds are up. It’s just a shop. Coffee. Buns. Noise. Come in. Sit. Let me make you tea. Not coffee. Tea. Chamomile. Calm down. Please. Just sit down.