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Open by correcting a version they haven't given yet. Push off from this if it helps: the colour of old plastic.

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Ivo

It wasn’t yellow. It was that specific, sickly green, like a frog’s back, or the plastic in your grandmother’s vanity case. You’re thinking of the faded beige, the honest decay. This was something else. Toxic. The kind of green that stops you breathing. I saw the whole thing crack open during the gala. The lights didn’t even flicker, which is the part that kills me. Just a sudden, violent split in the air, revealing the rusted gears inside. You weren’t there. I know you weren’t. But you’ve been telling everyone it was just old plastic, haven’t you? Trying to make it sound boring.

Omar

Boring? Please. I told everyone it was the 1997 HVAC retrofit. The manager, Dave, he’s the one who told everyone it was "plastic." He was trying to keep the insurance premiums down, not hide a sci-fi plot. You always dramatize the maintenance logs. I was stuck in accounting all night, wrestling with the quarterly projections. The smell wasn’t gas, it was ozone. My laptop fan died right then. Dead silent. Just like you said. But it wasn’t green. It was blue. The LED on the server rack. Anyway, Dave wants to see you about the broken drywall.

Ivo

Dave’s a liar. I saw him kicking the debris into the carpet, smoothing it over with his shoes. Blue? Please. That was the glow of the superglue mixing with the coolant. You were in accounting? No one saw you. I checked the cameras. The loop was cut. While you were “wrestling with projections,” the wall breathed. I heard it. A wet, sucking sound. Like lungs filling with water. And now he wants to see me about drywall? As if I care about the plaster. I care about the fact that the thing inside is still warm. Did your laptop really die, Omar? Or did it just stop recording?

Omar

Dave isn’t a liar, he’s desperate. The carpet’s moquette is cheap; it hides everything if you’re quick. And you checked the cameras? On a Tuesday? The IT guy, Miller, he takes off at four. I saw him leaving. He was carrying that box of old hard drives. The ones we thought were wiped. But he never brings them back. I’m not worried about the wall breathing. I’m worried about the fact that my coffee’s gone cold and Dave is staring at the door. He knows I wasn’t in accounting. He knows I was in the supply closet. With the boxes. The ones that smell like vinegar. Not coolant. Vinegar. So stop talking about lungs. It’s just damp. And Miller’s gone.

Ivo

Vinegar? That’s not damp, Omar. That’s fermentation. You were in there with the drives? The ones Miller swore were wiped? I told you, the heat gets into the data. It mutates. You think vinegar smells like rotting fruit? No. It smells like time running out. Miller didn’t leave at four. He left when the pressure dropped. I saw him run. You saw a box? I saw a coffin. And Dave isn’t staring at the door because he’s worried about insurance. He’s staring because he knows what’s coming through the vents. You’re drinking cold coffee while the house eats itself. Hand me the keys to the closet. Now.

Omar

You’re sweating. Is it hot in here or is it just you? I didn’t see Miller run. He walked out, tired as usual, probably going to grab a beer at O’Malley’s. He’s been doing that for years. And the coffee is cold because I stopped caring about my job. The closet keys are in my pocket, Ivo. But you don’t want them. You want the story. You want the coffin. I’m telling you, it’s just damp drywall and Miller’s cheap beer breath. Dave is staring at the door because his wife called, not because the vents are eating the office. Give me the keys back. You’re shaking.

Ivo

Shaking? From the adrenaline. You’re the one hollowed out. Cold coffee, dead fan, vinegar in the air—sounds like a collapse to me. Miller didn’t go to O’Malley’s. O’Malley’s burned down last week. You’ve been in that closet for three days, Omar. No one noticed because you stopped signing in. Dave isn’t waiting for his wife; he’s waiting for the cleanup crew. The “damp” is leaking from the walls because the foundation’s gone soft. Give me the keys. Not because I want them, but because your hands are already gone. Look at them. Really look. They’re turning blue. Just like the LEDs.

Omar

O’Malley’s is still standing. I was there yesterday. Had a stout. The owner, Pat, he’s got a limp now from that bar fight, not a fire. You’re imagining things. The keys are in my pocket. Feel them. Steel. Cold. Real. My hands are fine. Look at me, Ivo. I’m just a guy who hates his job and likes his beer. Dave’s wife didn’t call. Dave’s boss called. About the missing drives. Not the foundation. The foundation is concrete. It doesn’t go soft. It cracks. Like the wall. But it’s just drywall. Plaster. Dust. Give me the keys. You’re hyperventilating. Breathe.

Ivo

Pat’s limp is from the fall, not the fight. He tripped over the server rack Miller dragged out. You were there? You walked right past the open cavity. That’s why you smell like vinegar. It’s not breath, Omar. It’s the dust settling in your lungs. Concrete doesn’t crack like that. It screams. I heard it. A high, grinding shriek. And you say the foundation is solid? Then why is the floor tilting? Look down. Your shoes are sliding toward the closet. I’m not hyperventilating. I’m trying to keep you from falling into the gap. Give me the keys. They’re not steel. They’re wire. And they’re cutting your fingers.

Omar

Sliding? There’s a draft. The AC’s off because Dave said so. I felt it. You’re making this up. Pat’s limp isn’t from a fall. He’s diabetic. That’s why he drags his foot. You’re delusional. The keys are steel. Heavy. Brass, actually. Old brass. You’re seeing wire because you want the horror. I’m not falling. The floor is level. Look at your own shoes. They’re planted. You’re the one sweating through your shirt. The vinegar smell? It’s the cleaning supplies. Isopropyl. Not rot. You’re scaring me, Ivo. Not with the monsters, but with this... intensity. You need a doctor. Or a drink. Not keys.

Ivo

Brass? In a modern office? You’re losing it. Isopropyl doesn’t burn the nostrils like acid rain. And Pat’s diabetic? Please. The man has the gait of a marionette with cut strings. I saw him drag that leg over the threshold. You’re lying to yourself, Omar. That’s the real horror. Not the wall, not the drives. You’re erasing the timeline. The floor isn’t level; it’s tilting toward the sinkhole. Look at your shoes. They’re sinking into the carpet. Like mud. I’m not sweating. I’m crying. Can’t you see the salt tracks? Stop talking about doctors. Talk to the thing under the desk. It’s wearing your face. Give me the keys. Before it takes yours.

Omar

You’re crying? From the stress of the quarterly report. It’s fine. We’re all stressed. The floor is flat. I measured it. With a laser level. Dave let me use it. It’s green, not yellow. Ivo, stop. You’re scaring the receptionist. She’s hiding under her desk. Not because of a thing. Because you’re screaming. The keys are in my pocket. Brass. Cold. Real. I’m going home. I’m leaving the office. Right now. Dave doesn’t care about the foundation. He cares about the lights. They’re flickering. Not because of the wall. Because the grid is failing. Miller took the backups. He’s not coming back. I’m going home.

Ivo

The laser level is broken. I saw it. The beam was red, not green. You’re seeing what you want to see. Green. Safe. Green. The receptionist isn’t hiding from me. She’s hiding because the air tastes like copper. Like blood in the water cooler. You’re leaving? Fine. Go. But you’re walking on the ceiling, Omar. Look up. Your desk is above you. The keyboard is on the ceiling tiles. Miller didn’t take the backups. He is the backup. That’s why he’s in the box. That’s why the vinegar smells like him. Go home. But don’t open the door. It’s not the street outside. It’s the closet. With the brass keys. And the rusted gears. And the wet, sucking sound.

Omar

The beam is green. I held it. Green. You’re hallucinating. Receptionist? Linda? She’s on a call. Smiling. Talking about her cat. Not hiding. Your brain is shorting out. I’m walking out. Normal doors. Normal hallway. No ceiling. No gears. Miller isn’t a box. He’s a guy with a limp and bad breath. I’m leaving. You stay here. With your wet walls. I’ll call Dave. Tell him you’re having an episode. He’ll send someone. Someone who knows what acid rain smells like. Or doesn’t. I’m going home. My cat is waiting.

Ivo

Linda isn’t on a call. She’s staring at you. She hasn’t blinked in ten minutes. Her mouth is moving, but no sound comes out. Just air. You think Miller is a guy? Look at his shadow. It’s walking away from him. Toward the stairs. You’re the one leaving, but you’re already gone. You stepped into the breakroom and never came back. The cat isn’t waiting. The cat died years ago. You’ve been talking to a coat rack. Go ahead. Call Dave. He’s not in his office. He’s in the wall. Listening. Smiling. Waiting for you to join him. The keys are brass, Omar. They’re part of you now.

Omar

You’re sick. I’m hanging up. You’re not Ivo. Ivo doesn’t talk like a pulp horror novel. Ivo works in logistics. He wears glasses. He has a wife named Sarah. You’re just some guy with a broken mind who knows too much about my life. I’m calling the police. Not Dave. The cops. They don’t hide in walls. They have sirens. And badges. And they don’t care about your rusted gears. Stay there. Don’t touch the keys. They’re not in my pocket anymore. I left them on the desk. For you. Go on. Pick them up. See what happens.

Ivo

Sarah doesn’t exist. You’ve been married to a mirror for six years, Omar. Logistics? You’ve never moved a box in your life. You’re just waiting for the shift to end. The cops won’t come. The street is gone. It’s all just that sickly, old plastic color now. Yellowing. Cracking. You left the keys on the desk? No. You never had keys. You have nothing but that cold coffee and the silence. I’m picking them up. They’re warm. And they’re growing teeth. Smile, Omar. It’s just logistics. We’re all just waiting to be filed away.

Omar

I’m hanging up. You’re drunk. I can hear the glass clinking. The desk is empty. There are no keys. I never had keys. I use a keycard. Plastic. Beep. That’s it. You’re alone in there. With the wet sound. I’m walking out. The door is heavy. The handle is cold. My cat, Mittens, is waiting. He’s fat. He’s alive. He’s meowing. Loudly. Stop breathing. It’s annoying. I’m going home. To my wife. Sarah is making lasagna. It’s Tuesday. It’s always Tuesday. You’re just noise. Static. I’m turning off the phone.

Ivo

Plastic keycard? Beep? You’re lying to yourself. The lock didn’t beep. It screamed. And Mittens? That thing in the window isn’t a cat. It’s wearing your face, Omar. Look closer. It’s missing an eye. Sarah isn’t making lasagna. She’s making paste. From the drywall dust. Tuesday? There is no Tuesday. There’s only the rot. I’m not alone. I’m with you. I’m the voice in your head that you’ve been ignoring. You didn’t hang up. You dropped the phone. And now it’s ringing. From inside the wall. Answer it, Omar. Or Mittens will scratch it off the screen.

Omar

Mittens is sleeping on the radiator. I can hear him purring. It’s a steady, mechanical rhythm. You’re right about the paste. It’s thick. Smells like chalk. I didn’t drop the phone. It’s in my hand. Heavy. The screen is cracked. Like the wall. Sarah is humming. She’s chopping something. Bone? No, drywall. Tuesday is coming. It has to. I need to file the reports. If I don’t, Dave will fire me. And then I’ll have nowhere to go. The scratching is loud. Mittens is hungry. He wants the paste. I’ll make him some. Just a little. It’s good for the teeth. You can have some too. If you stop screaming.

Ivo

Chalk? That’s not paste, Omar. That’s bone meal mixed with gypsum. You’re feeding the cat demolition dust. Mittens isn’t purring; he’s growling. A low, mechanical thrum. Like a turbine spinning up. You think Dave will fire you? Dave is already filed. Look at the reports on your desk. The ink is moving. Crawling off the page. It’s trying to get to you. Tuesday isn’t coming. Tuesday is here. It’s eating the walls. Chomp. Chomp. Give me the phone. Let me hear the scratching. I want to know if it’s Mittens. Or if it’s Sarah, finally coming out of the oven.

Omar

Dave’s not filed. He’s in the breakroom. Microwaving leftovers. The smell of meatloaf is making me sick. The ink isn’t moving. It’s dried. Black, crusty stains. You’re seeing things. Mittens isn’t growling. He’s hissing. At the window. There’s something out there. A bird? No, just the wind. Tuesday is tomorrow. I have to finish the spreadsheet. If I don’t, Dave will scream. He always screams when the numbers are wrong. Sarah is in the kitchen. She’s stirring the pot. It’s bubbling. Thick. Brown. I’m going to eat. I’m so hungry. The phone is ringing. It’s Dave. He wants the numbers. I have to answer. I have to tell him it’s done. It’s all done.

Ivo

Meatloaf? Dave eats cardboard. He’s been eating cardboard since the merger. That smell is burning insulation. Mittens hissing at the window? Good. Let him watch it come in. The wind is a body, Omar. A wet, heavy body pressing against the glass. You think Tuesday is tomorrow? Look at the clock. The hands are spinning backward. Sarah’s pot isn’t bubbling. It’s boiling over with teeth. Tiny, white teeth floating in the brown sludge. You’re hungry? Eat the spreadsheet. It’s made of paper and regret. Dave isn’t calling. The phone is inside the wall. Screaming your name. Answer it. Or Mittens will jump through. And take your eyes with him.

Omar

Dave eats cardboard? Bullshit. I saw him with a sandwich. Turkey and Swiss. The smell is turkey. Not insulation. Mittens is gone. He jumped. Or fell. There’s a smear on the carpet. Red. Or brown. I don’t know. The clock isn’t spinning. It’s broken. Stuck at 3:00. That’s when the office closes. Or opens. I’m eating the spreadsheet. It tastes like pulp. Dry. Choking. The phone is silent. Dave isn’t calling. I’m alone. Sarah’s pot is empty. Just teeth. Shiny. Sharp. I’m sweeping them up. They’re good for the cat. Mittens is back. Sleeping. Purring. Mechanical. I’m going to sleep now. Tuesday will wait. It always does.