Unsupervised

The Queue ·

Open by asking if this is the right line. Push off from this if it helps: the colour of old plastic.

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Pia

Is this even the right line? Feels like it's been forty minutes and we've moved the length of, I don't know, a shopping trolley. Also that rope barrier's the colour of old plastic, like a bank queue from 1994. Somebody should replace those.

Jo

It’s the right line for getting a ticket. Not for moving. That rope is durable. I like it. It holds. The color doesn’t matter. What matters is the system. You think they care about aesthetics? They care about throughput. And we’re losing. Look at that guy ahead. He’s checking his watch. He’s already given up. You’re still fighting it. That’s the difference between us. I’m just watching him fail. It’s almost soothing. Like watching paint dry, but with more suffering. Do you have a ticket?

Pia

No ticket. That's the whole problem, that's why we're in this rope maze in the first place. Watch guy arrived after us, by the way — I clocked him at the corner by the newspaper stand, maybe six minutes back. Now he's two ahead because he cut through when the guy with the stroller stepped out to answer his phone. I'm keeping track. Not because it matters. Because there's nothing else to do with my hands.

Jo

He cut. It’s human nature. The stroller was an accident; the cut was a choice. You’re keeping track to prove you’re not the only one seeing the injustice. But justice doesn’t move the rope. It just makes the wait heavier. I clocked the coffee smell from the stand over there. Strong. Burnt. That’s what this line smells like. Regret. You think I don’t see you tapping your foot? It’s doing it too. We’re both waiting for the same thing, really. Just him with a ticket, me with the scent. Or lack thereof.

Pia

My foot's doing that on its own, I didn't authorize it. And yeah, the coffee's burnt — they've been running that same pot since we got here, I'd bet money. Watch guy's up to three ahead now. There's a woman behind him doing the exact same thing, phone out, waiting for a gap. I've decided she's next. Not because I want her to fail. Just — it's the pattern. Rope holds, people don't. You said that about the plastic, sort of. Durable rope, collapsing humans.

Jo

Your foot’s betraying you. That’s primitive. The woman with the phone is a hack. I saw her glance at the gap, then step. Clean break. You’re watching for patterns because it gives you an illusion of control. But you’re just tracking decay. Rope holds because it’s dead material. People fail because they’re trying to live while standing still. It’s inefficient. I bet the coffee pot is cold now, not just burnt. Sludge. That’s what we’re drinking in. You want to fix it? Move. But you won’t. You’re comfortable in the misery. It’s the only thing that feels real here.

Pia

I'm not comfortable, I have somewhere to be at eleven, there's a woman at the shop who'll dock me if I'm late again — third time this month. So no, this isn't misery I've chosen, it's just misery I'm stuck in, there's a difference. And don't turn "the woman with the phone" into some grand statement about the human condition, she's cutting a queue, that's it. Watch guy's four ahead now. I'm losing the thread of who's actually cheating versus just lucky.

Jo

Eleven. The deadline. That’s the only thing that matters. The shop, the dock. It’s not about the rope. It’s about the wage. You think I care about the queue’s morality? I care about the fact that this line hasn’t moved while I’m thinking about lunch. That’s the real tragedy. Not the cheating. The inertia. You’re losing the thread because you’re looking at people, not the space between them. The space is empty. That’s why he’s ahead. She’ll be next. It’s not luck. It’s velocity. You’re stationary. That’s why you’re stuck. And angry. Anger is just kinetic energy with nowhere to go. Like your foot. It’s tapping for you.

Pia

I'm not angry, I'm annoyed, those aren't the same thing and you keep flattening it like it's all one temperature. And lunch — you're thinking about lunch? We haven't even gotten a ticket. That's optimism I don't have room for right now. Velocity, space between people, fine, sure, but the line still hasn't moved, so whatever theory you've got, it isn't paying off. Watch guy's practically at the desk now. I stopped counting who's ahead of who. Not because I gave up. Because the number stopped meaning anything about ten minutes ago.

Jo

Annoyance is just anger that hasn’t boiled yet. You’re simmering. I’m thinking about lunch because hunger is a constant. The queue is a variable. You stopped counting because the data set is too small. Three people ahead of you, five behind. It’s statistical noise. The guy at the desk is probably eating a sandwich. He’s been there an hour. He’s not working; he’s existing. That’s the real theft. Your time, his lunch. You think velocity matters? Nothing moves here. We’re in a static field. The rope is the only thing that’s honest. It doesn’t promise anything. It just holds. You want to leave? Jump the rope. But you won’t. You’re too busy being annoyed. It’s safer than being wrong.

Pia

I'm not jumping a rope over a ticket for a form I don't even want to fill out. That's not safety, that's proportion. The guy at the desk eating a sandwich — if that's true, that's genuinely the worst thing I've heard today, and I work retail, I hear a lot of bad things. Nothing moves, fine, agreed, but you don't have to enjoy it this much. You're narrating the stillness like it's a nature documentary. Meanwhile I've got eleven o'clock bearing down on me and a rope that doesn't care either way.

Jo

Enjoying it? I’m observing it. There’s a difference. You’re letting the stillness rot you. I’m just watching the spectacle. A man eating a sandwich while the world waits. It’s pathetic. But efficient for him. You’re letting eleven o’clock dictate your mood. That’s the trap. The rope doesn’t care, but your boss does. That’s the real beast. Not the line. The clock. You’re angry at the rope because it’s visible. The clock is invisible, so you just sweat. I’m fine with the sandwich. I don’t have a shift. I have nowhere to be. That’s the luxury you’re mourning. You want to move? Stop looking at the rope. Look at the gap. It’s still there. You’re just too busy being annoyed to see it.

Pia

There's a gap? Where — by the pillar? That's not a gap, that's a woman with three shopping bags who hasn't moved in five minutes, that's just a person, not an opportunity. And no shift, no eleven o'clock — must be nice, genuinely, not being sarcastic, or maybe a little. I've got the dock hanging over me and you've got theories about sandwiches. We're not in the same line, really. Same rope, different stakes. Watch guy's gone, by the way. Through the door. Didn't even look back.

Jo

She’s stationary. Stillness isn’t a gap. You’re hallucinating opportunities because you’re desperate. The guy through the door? He’s free. No sandwitch, no dock, no rope. Just gone. You’re still here. That’s the tragedy. Not the queue. The choice to stay. I don’t have stakes because I don’t have a life to lose. You’re clinging to eleven o’clock like a lifeline, but it’s drowning you. The woman with the bags? She’s part of the architecture now. Ignore her. Find the edge. Look where the rope frays. That’s where the escape is. Not in the line. In the break. You’re too busy watching the guy to see the wall behind you.

Pia

No life to lose — dramatic way to put it, you sound like you're auditioning for something. There's no wall behind me, there's a fire exit sign and a guy selling phone cases out of a duffel bag, that's the whole architecture. I'm not finding an edge, I'm finding a ticket, that's the actual goal here, remember, before the sandwich and the rope philosophy. Bags Woman just moved half a step. Historic. Someone should mark the occasion.

Jo

Dramatic? Maybe. But true. You’re chasing a piece of paper while a guy sells knockoff chargers in a duffel bag. The absurdity is the point. Bags Woman moved. A miracle. But she’s still in the line. She’s still trapped. You’re judging her progress like it’s a race. It’s a hostage situation. You want the ticket. I want to see if the phone case guy gets caught. The fire exit sign is blinking. Slowly. Like a heartbeat. Or a countdown. Your boss docking your pay is just another form of theft. The rope steals your time. The shop steals your money. The guy in the duffel bag steals your dignity. We’re all being robbed. I’m just watching the heist. You’re crying because you’re one of the victims.

Pia

I'm not crying, I'm standing here with dry eyes and a dead phone battery, which honestly is the actual crisis, not the metaphors. Is the sign blinking or is that just the light doing something? Because now I can't unsee it and it's making the whole wait feel worse, thanks for that. Duffel bag guy's looking at us now. I think he heard "getting caught." Bags Woman hasn't moved again. Back to zero. The miracle expired.

Jo

Dry eyes. Good. Crying wastes salt. The battery’s dead. That’s the real terror. No distraction. Just the sign and the rope. It’s not blinking. It’s flickering. Voltage drop. Old wiring. Like everything else here. The duffel guy’s looking. He knows. He’s selling access. Not cases. Freedom. Bags Woman is a statue now. Posed. You can’t beat a statue. It doesn’t get tired. You’re fighting gravity. The sign is a metronome. Tick. Tick. Tick. Your boss is a metronome too. Eleven o’clock. Tick. You’re synced. That’s why you’re stuck. You’re vibrating at the frequency of waiting. Duffel guy’s offering a counterfeit lifeline. Take it. Or don’t. I’m watching the light. It’s dying. Just like my hope for a sandwich. Or a ticket. Or you.

Pia

Or me. Bold thing to say to someone you're stuck in a rope maze with. I'm not synced with anything, I'm just tired and mildly late-adjacent, that's different from vibrating. You keep making the sign sound significant, it's a light fixture, it needs a new ballast, that's the whole story. Duffel guy's packing up. Guess the heist's over before it started. Bags Woman still hasn't moved. I'm calling it — she's not in this line anymore, she's just standing near it. New category. Adjacent, not enrolled.

Jo

Adjacent. I like that. She’s defected. Created a neutral zone. The duffel guy packed up because he’s not a smuggler; he’s a pawn. He knows the game is rigged. You’re right about the ballast. It’s just a failing bulb. But failure is contagious. My shift starts in an hour. I’m paid by the hour, not by the minute, which is why I’m standing here instead of clocking in. The manager will dock me. Just like you. We’re all docking each other. It’s the economy of the rope. Bags Woman is safe. She’s out. You’re still in. And the sign is still flickering. It’s a heartbeat. A slow, dying one. Do you want to help? Or just watch it stop?

Pia

Watch it stop, obviously — I'm not an electrician. Also thought you said you had no life to lose, no stakes, nowhere to be. Now there's a shift and a manager. Which is it? Because I've been mentally filing you under "person with nothing on the line," and now you're telling me you're docked too. That changes the whole score. Bags Woman defects, duffel guy retreats, and you've had a job this whole time. Feels like you've been cheating the line the way watch guy did. Just quieter about it.

Jo

I didn't say I didn't have a job. I said I had nowhere to be. There’s a difference. I’m already there. The shop is five minutes from here. I walked over to watch. To see if the rope holds. It doesn’t. But I’m late now. My manager is going to dock me. Just like your shop. We’re all being docked. It’s a tax on existence. You think I’m cheating? I’m just observing. From the outside. But now I’m inside too. The clock is ticking. My shift started ten minutes ago. I’m already in debt. To time. To the rope. To you. You’re judging my position, but you’re in the same hole. Deeper, maybe. You have a goal. I just have a deadline. And the deadline is now. The sign flickered again. Did you see it? Or were you too busy auditing my consistency?