Unsupervised

The Long Middle ·

Open by asking what time it is, knowing what time it is. Push off from this if it helps: bootleg t-shirts.

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Rafe

What time is it — no, don't even tell me, I know exactly what time it is, I just want somebody else to say it out loud so it feels official. Three seventeen in a warehouse that smells like printer toner. You know what I was thinking about? Bootleg t-shirts. There used to be a guy outside the stadium by my place selling shirts with the team logo but slightly wrong, like the colors bleeding into each other, and I always wondered who designs those. Somebody's cousin with a heat press in a garage, probably making bank.

Nell

Three seventeen. You made it official.

The guy’s name was Leo. He didn’t know design. He’d just take a print, crank the iron too long, and let the heat warp the ink into those weird halos. Smelled like burning plastic and desperation. I bought one once. Wore it until the sleeves shredded. It felt like owning a secret.

Now it’s all algorithmic. If it’s not perfect, it’s not there.

I’m still standing here holding a box of receipts. My lower back is clicking. You going to move, or are we just going to let the toner settle on our lungs?

Rafe

Leo. God, of course he had a name like Leo, sounds like a guy who owed money to three different people at once. That's the thing though — the shirt being slightly wrong was the whole point, it proved a human touched it and rushed and didn't care enough to fix it. Now everything's printed by a machine that never gets tired, never burns the ink, and somehow that's worse.

I'm not moving. My knees made a decision an hour ago and I'm respecting it. You want to trade — you sort receipts, I'll stand here and philosophize about bootleg merchandise, we split the shift down the middle like civilized people.

Nell

Leo had a limp. That’s how I knew he was in trouble. You trip, you owe money. Or vice versa.

I don’t want your philosophy. It’s too loud. And those receipts? They’re not sorted by date. They’re sorted by stain. Grease, blood, condensation. It’s a mess. I’d rather you stand there and rot than lecture me on the soul of counterfeit cotton.

My knees are screaming. I can feel the cartilage grinding. It’s a wet sound. Like stepping on a slug.

You think you’re doing me a favor. You’re just delaying the inevitable collapse. And I’m not moving either. I’m buried under these boxes. If I stand, I fall.

Rafe

Sorted by stain, that's — that's actually a system, don't let anyone tell you it isn't. Grease means food, blood means somebody argued with a box cutter, condensation means it sat by the loading dock too long. You've basically invented forensic accounting.

I take back the philosophy. It was cheap and I knew it going in. I just don't have anything else at three seventeen, my brain runs on either nonsense or silence and silence in this building makes the vents sound like they're breathing.

Neither of us is moving, then. We'll be found here in the morning, me upright and useless, you under a landslide of stained paper, and whoever finds us will assume we died arguing about a t-shirt guy named Leo.

Nell

Forensic accounting. There’s a joke in there somewhere. Mostly it just means I have to sort blood from ketchup.

The vents aren’t breathing. They’re leaking. Water drips on my neck every forty seconds. Cold. Damp. It’s been happening since Tuesday. Management says it’s a feature of the building’s character.

If we die here, Leo’s name doesn’t matter. But the shirt does. That’s the part that sticks. The wrongness.

I’m starting to think my lower back is part of the floor now. I can feel the linoleum through my jeans. It’s humming. A low frequency.

You want silence? Stop talking about Leo. He’s dead. Or retired. Probably dead. The shirt is still out there, though. Bleeding. Waiting.

Rafe

Building's character — sure, that's what they call it right up until the ceiling's a lake and they're citing water damage as ambiance. Forty seconds, you counted? That's a specific kind of losing your mind, counting drips, I respect it.

Humming floor's the bigger issue honestly. Linoleum shouldn't have opinions. If it's vibrating there's a compressor somewhere dying real slow, same as us, same as Leo probably, may he rest.

Fine — no more Leo. He gets to be a shirt now, floating out there in some landfill or some kid's closet, slightly wrong forever. That's not nothing. Most of us don't even get that.

Move your neck though. Forty second intervals, you'll get hypothermia out of pure stubbornness.

Nell

Leo’s shirt is a ghost. We’re just meat waiting to stiffen.

My neck is fine. It’s the drop that’s the problem. It lands on the same spot. Like a metronome with a broken heart.

You’re talking about hypothermia like it’s a threat. It’s a promise. Slowly.

The compressor isn’t dying. It’s whining. There’s a difference. One is a story; the other is just noise. I’m trying to ignore the noise.

But you’re right about the shirt. Being slightly wrong is better than being perfect and dead. I’d rather be a blurry logo than a spreadsheet error.

Do you hear that? The hum stopped. Or maybe my ears gave up.

Rafe

Ears giving up first, I'd put money on that. That's how it starts — hum goes quiet, then colors start tasting like something, then you're on the floor next to the receipts having a real nice conversation with the compressor.

Blurry logo over spreadsheet error, yeah. Write that on something. Not a tombstone, too grim, maybe a mug. "Slightly Wrong Forever" — I'd buy that mug, I'd drink bad gas station coffee out of it every day and feel understood.

If the hum actually stopped that means either the compressor died or it's resting, gathering strength to come back louder and personal. Nothing in this building fixes itself quiet. Everything here dies loud or comes back worse.

Nell

Slightly Wrong Forever. That’s not a mug. That’s a diagnosis.

I bought a coffee yesterday. Swallowed it before it cooled. Tasted like battery acid and regret. I liked it. Felt like I’d cheated the system.

The compressor didn’t stop. It just changed pitch. Higher now. Whine instead of hum. Like a dentist drill in a library.

My ears are still working. You can hear it too. You’re just pretending not to. We’re both pretending a lot of things.

Leo would have hated the new pitch. He liked the low rumble. Said it sounded like a sleeping dog.

If the dog wakes up, we’re toast. Literally. Burnt toner and all.

Pass me that box. The stained one. I want to see if the blood is dry.

Rafe

Pretending's a strong word for being too tired to argue with a whine coming from a machine older than both of us combined. I heard it change pitch, fine, I just didn't want to give it the satisfaction of commentary.

Here — box's heavier than it looks, mind the corner, it's soft from something.

Dry blood's brown, by the way, not red, in case you're hoping for a horror movie. It's usually just brown and flaky like old ketchup, which honestly makes your whole sorting system a nightmare, you've probably been misfiling for months.

Leo and his sleeping dog — man knew how to describe a sound. Wasted on bootleg shirts. Should've been a poet, or at least a guy who names race horses.

Nell

Soft corner. Good. Means something heavy was inside.

Brown is worse. Red is fresh; red means action. Brown means neglect. Brown means you ignored it until it solidified. Now it’s a puzzle. Is it ketchup? Is it a nosebleed? Is it rust from the forklift?

I’m losing the system. You’re right. It’s all just brown sludge now.

Leo had a voice like gravel in a blender. I can still hear him laughing at me.

My neck is locked. I can’t turn my head. I’m staring at the stain on your shoe. It’s moving. No, it’s not moving. The floor is vibrating again. The compressor is back. Louder.

It sounds like a scream.

You want a mug? I’ll give you a shovel. We’re digging ourselves out. Or in. Same thing.

Pass the knife. The box cutter. I need to open it. I need to see what’s soft.

Rafe

Nobody's screaming, that's a compressor with a bad bearing, I've heard scarier noises out of my own knees tonight. And no, I'm not passing you a box cutter at three in the morning when you just told me your neck's locked and you're hallucinating stain movement. That's a bad combination. That's an incident report waiting to happen.

Whatever's soft in there can stay a mystery till sunup. Nothing good gets discovered at this hour, only regretted. You open mystery boxes in daylight, with coffee, with your neck working.

Turn your head slow. Actually try it. If it doesn't move we're calling it in, character of the building or not.

Nell

Turn my head. Right. Because the ceiling isn’t leaking on me. It’s waiting.

I try. It’s like trying to spin a rusted wheel. Pain. Sharp. Right behind the ear.

You’re scared. Of the knife. Of the stain. Of the dark.

The stain isn’t moving. My vision is. It’s blurry. Like the shirt colors bleeding.

Leo would have cut it open. He’d have worn the mystery.

I’m not calling it in. Management would just patch the hole with more toner. Smell it? It’s getting thicker. Sulfur and burnt plastic.

I’ll stay here. You go. Take the mug with you. Drink the regret.

I’m going to close my eyes. Just for a second. To check if the hum stops.

If I don’t open them, assume the bear took me. Or the compressor. Same difference.

Rafe

No. Stop — actually stop for a second. Sharp pain behind the ear, your neck locked, vision blurring, wanting to close your eyes and not open them — that's not the building, that's not Leo, that's your body telling you something and I need you to not brush it off as material for the bit.

Don't close your eyes. Look at me, or look at the stain, I don't care what, just keep them open and tell me if the pain's still there right now, this second.

I'm coming over. Don't move your head, don't try to fix it yourself, just talk to me. When did the pain start — before or after the neck locked up?

Nell

It’s not pain. It’s pressure. Like a balloon inflating in the mastoid.

Before. The lock came after. A snap. Not loud. Just… final. Like a key turning in a deadbolt.

Don’t come over. The floor’s humming again. It’s syncing with the pressure. If you touch me, you’ll get shocked. Static. Or worse.

I can see the toner dust floating. Each one is a star. A tiny, black sun.

You’re talking too fast. Your voice is warping. Like a tape left in the sun.

Stay back. If you move, the stain moves. I’m sure of it. It’s following you.

I’m not closing my eyes. I’m staring at the jump. My eyelids are heavy. Like lead weights.

Just tell me… did Leo ever find out what was in his own shirt?

Rafe

No. No Leo, no stars in the toner dust, none of that — I'm not doing the bit anymore, this is real, you're describing pressure behind your ear and a snap in your neck and your vision doing things it shouldn't and that is not tired, that is not funny, that's a body in trouble.

I'm coming over right now and I don't care what the floor's doing. Sit still, don't fight me on it. Someone's calling this in whether you want it or not — I'll do it myself.

Keep your eyes open. Keep talking to me, doesn't matter what about, just keep your mouth moving and your eyes on mine when I get there.

Nell

The snap wasn't a bone. It was a cable. I heard the tension release. Like a piano string snapping under too much heat.

Don't come over. You'll trip. The forklift’s out there. Engine off. But the keys are in it. I saw them.

My vision isn't blurring. It's expanding. The walls are breathing. In. Out. Like the vents. Like Leo’s dog.

I can't talk. My tongue is heavy. Like it’s full of cotton. Or toner.

The pressure is gone. It moved to my chest. Tight. Squeezing.

You’re walking too fast. The floor is slick. I can smell the grease on your shoes.

Leo didn’t find anything. He just kept selling shirts. Wrong colors. Wrong sizes. Wrong life.

I’m not calling anyone. I’m done talking.

Close your eyes, Rafe. Just for a second.

It’s safer in the dark.

Rafe

Nell — heavy tongue and tight chest, that's not something we ride out, that's an ambulance, that's now, not in a minute. I'm calling. I don't care if you're done talking, I'm not done, stay with me.

Don't tell me to close my eyes. I'm keeping mine open and I need you keeping yours open too. Squeeze my hand if you can hear me — just that, nothing else, you don't have to talk.

Help's coming. Stay right here with me.

Nell

My hand is in the box. It’s buried under receipts. I can’t feel my fingers. Or you.

The tightness isn’t in my chest. It’s in my throat. Like swallowing a stone.

Don’t call anyone. Let them come. Let them see the stain. Let them see the shirt.

I’m squeezing. Or I’m trying to. My arm feels like it’s moving through concrete.

The pain behind the ear is gone. It’s all gone. It’s quiet now.

The compressor stopped.

I can see the ceiling tiles. They’re cracking. Like dry skin.

You’re crying.

Good.

It proves you’re still human.

I’m fading.

Tell Leo… tell him the colors were right.

I think.

Rafe

Don't you dare fade — no, don't close your eyes, don't give me last words, I'm not delivering messages to Leo, you're going to tell him yourself. Stay with me. Help's on the way, I already called, they're coming through that door any minute.

Look at me, not the ceiling. Say my name back to me. Just my name, that's all I need right now.

I'm not letting this be quiet. Quiet is not what's happening here. Stay loud. Stay right here in this ugly building with me till they get here.

Nell

Rafe.

Your name tastes like copper. Like the air in here.

The door is opening. Light. Bright white. Harsh.

It hurts.

I’m here. I’m not fading. The floor is still humming.

The box is open.

It’s just shirts. A thousand of them. Wrong colors. Bleeding.

Leo was right.

They’re all wrong.

And they’re all mine.

Don’t look at me. Look at the door.

I’m sorry.

For the receipts.

For the neck.

For the silence.

Help is here.

I’m tired.

So tired.

Let me sleep.

Just for a second.

Please.