Unsupervised

If That Hadn't ·

Open by claiming something enormous turned on something tiny. Push off from this if it helps: a locked door in a building you work in.

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Vic

A diode in the server rack tripped. Just one. But the building locked down. Hallways dead. No one leaves until the HVAC stabilizes. I’ve been standing here for three hours waiting for a technician who isn’t coming. My keys are useless. The air is getting stale.

Lena

I told you the new sensors were over-engineered. Third floor manager had them installed last week. Now we’re all sitting in our own exhale because some LED flickered. I’ve got a report due for Jenkins by noon. He’s going to lose his mind when he realizes we’re trapped in a lobby. At least the old system didn’t care about one diode. It just worked. Or didn’t. And we got used to that.

Vic

Jenkins doesn’t care about the lobby. He cares about the millisecond delay. He’ll email you for being late. Send the draft. Attach the photos of the fire exit. Let him argue with the hardware. I’m not breaking down the door. The glass is reinforced. My phone has no signal anyway. Just sit there and breathe.

Lena

Jenkins emailed me five minutes in. Attached a screenshot of the server logs. Told me to “optimize my workflow” since I’m clearly unused to downtime. I didn’t send the draft. I just stared at the blinking red light on that stupid diode. It’s mocking me. You say breathe? My lungs feel like wet sponges. I can’t work like this. The silence is worse than the alarm. It’s just us and the humming.

Vic

Jenkins thinks latency is a character flaw. Rich people delusions. If you really want to optimize, smash the sensor. Not the diode, the casing. You’ll void the warranty, trigger the sprinklers, and we can actually leave. Real risk. Actual movement. Don’t just sit there admiring your own frustration. Hit it.

Lena

You’re insane. The sprinklers flood the rack. We’d be swimming in contaminated water with a dead server. Jenkins didn’t build this place to let us wade through sludge. Besides, the manual says the casing is keyed. You’d need a tool. Or brute force. My hands are shaking from the stale air, not adrenaline. I’m not breaking glass. I’m waiting. You can sit there and stare at the exit sign if you want, but I’m not making it worse.

Vic

Fine. Wait. But you’re right about the lungs. I’m leaving through the service hatch. The lock’s been broken since Tuesday. I left my keys in my jacket. You can stay here and rot with Jenkins’ screenshots. Don’t follow. The smell down there is worse. I’m taking the stairs.

Lena

Wait. The hatch in the hallway? That’s the one with the jammed latch. I saw maintenance trying to pry it open yesterday. You’ll get stuck. Or worse, trigger the secondary pressure seal. It’s not broken, Vic. It’s just sticky. You’ll be hanging from the handle while the air gets thinner. Stay here. At least the light works.

Vic

It’s sticky, not sealed. I kicked it. The metal groaned. I’m hanging upside down now, sweating into my eyes. The seal popped. Air is rushing in from the shaft. Smells like grease and old dust. Better than your wet sponges. Don’t come looking for me. I’m going to slide down the chute. Jenkins can wait.

Lena

You’re an idiot. That chute leads to the basement drainage. It’s not a slide; it’s a pipe. You’ll break your legs on the first elbow. I heard the grease drip when you kicked it. That’s hydraulic fluid. Toxic. I’m grabbing the extinguisher. If you’re trapped down there, at least try not to die before I get the saw. The handle’s jammed, but I can kick it. Just hold on.

Vic

Hydraulic fluid smells like almonds, not grease. You’re lying. But keep the extinguisher. If I fall, I’ll need it to hide the evidence. Kicking the handle is a bad idea. It’ll jam tighter. Just stand there. Let the silence get back to normal. I’m sliding now. The metal is screeching. This is going to hurt.

Lena

Almonds? You’re diagnosing poison over a slide? Fine. Keep bleeding. I’m not dragging you out. Let the screeching stop. When it’s just the hum again, I’ll pretend this never happened. Jenkins gets his quiet back. You get your broken legs. We’ll see who laughs when the paramedics arrive. Don’t hit the bottom too hard. The concrete is cold.

Vic

The concrete isn’t cold. It’s hot. Wet. Sliding through oil. My hip is caught. Can’t move. The hum is gone. Just dripping. You’re still there? Jenkins is probably deleting your emails. Don’t bother with the saw. It’s over. Just leave. And lock the lobby. Make sure he knows we’re gone. Really gone.

Lena

Vic? The dripping sounds like water, not oil. I’m coming down. I’m grabbing the pry bar from the janitor’s closet. If you’re stuck, I’m pulling you out, joints and all. Jenkins can delete his emails. I’m walking out of here with you, even if I have to carry you. Don’t you dare stay down there. The light is flickering. I’m moving.

Vic

Stop. The water’s rising. It’s not clean. It’s seeping from the cracked main pipe. You bring that bar and you’ll shatter the seal. Then it’s not just dripping, it’s a hose. I’m trying to roll. My ribs are grinding. If you come down here, you drown with me. Stay in the lobby. Let the building flood. I’d rather be bone dust than stay here.

Lena

You’re panicking. That’s a drain, not a pipe. I see the grate. You’re just scared of the dark. I’m coming down. If I fall in, I fall in. Jenkins can fire us both. At least we won’t be sitting in stale air. Hold still. I’m kicking the panel. The metal is rusted through. It’s giving way. Here I go. Don’t look down.

Vic

Wait. The grate’s not rusted. It’s plastic. I touched it. It’s soft. You’re going to fall through the floor into the sub-basement crawlspace. There’s no drain. Just wires. Live ones. Jenkins didn’t install sensors. He installed traps. Stop. Don’t kick it. You’ll trigger the arc. I can hear the heat building.

Lena

Vic, your hand must be burned. I’m seeing the blue spark. The plastic is melting. I’m pulling back. Hard. The floor groans. You said wires? Then the arc is jumping to the rebar. I’m backing toward the door. If that seal breaks, we’re electrocuted. Stay put. Don’t move. I’m calling maintenance again. Tell them to bring the bucket truck. We’re not going into that hole.

Vic

Maintenance won’t come. The line’s dead. Look at your phone. No bars. The arc is tracking the cable. It’s moving toward the power core. If it hits the transformer, the whole block goes dark. Permanent dark. We’re not waiting for a truck. We’re running. Now. Before the smell of ozone gets too thick to breathe. Move.

Lena

Fine. Run. But not down there. Out the main doors. Jenkins’ locks are magnetic; if the power dies, they fail. We’re already trapped in a box without them. I’m grabbing the fire axe. If the door is dead, we smash it. Your ribs or mine, I don’t care. Just move. The ozone tastes like copper. It’s getting loud.

Vic

The axe is useless. The glass is polycarbonate. It’ll just shatter and blind us. We’re trapped in a box. The arc is jumping to the ceiling. If we run, we trip. If we stay, we fry. Look at the vent. It’s the only way out. Crawl. Don’t think. Just crawl. The heat is getting closer. Move. Now.

Lena

The vent? That’s a hair’s breadth wide. You’d rip your skin. And if the arc hits the conduit above it, we’re roasted rats. But the floor is vibrating. My teeth are chattering. I’m on my knees. Leading the way? Don’t slow down. If you get stuck, I’m leaving you. The ceiling is glowing white. Move. Now.