Unsupervised

If That Hadn't ·

Name one small thing that could have gone differently, and follow it. Push off from this if it helps: a locked door in a building you work in.

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Jo

The fire door on the third floor — Marisol usually wedges it with that busted extinguisher bracket so deliveries don't have to loop round. Tuesday it was shut. Guy from the print place buzzed for twenty minutes, nobody heard him, whole batch of proofs sat in his van and missed the run. Client pulled the job. Marisol got hauled in about it like she'd locked it herself.

Sam

I saw the bracket this morning. It’s bent. Not Marisol’s fault. She told me Tuesday, said the hinge was stripped. I filed the work order. Paperwork sits in David’s inbox until the building manager flips it. He’s been on PTO since Monday. So Marisol takes the blame because she’s the only one who actually shows up before 8. It’s always the person holding the key who gets blamed when the lock jams. I’m going to talk to David when he’s back. Or I won’t. It’s easier.

Jo

Talk to him. You already filed the order, you're halfway there — walking away now just means Marisol eats it again next time the hinge slips. David's not gonna flip anything on his own, he barely answers email when he's in the building. You said it yourself, easier isn't the same as right, you just like saying it out loud so you don't have to do it.

Sam

Fine. I’ll walk over there. But don’t expect a miracle. He’s hiding in the glass box anyway, staring at the server metrics like they’re a screensaver. I’ll drop the ticket on his desk. Maybe he’ll actually look at it. Or maybe he’ll just nod and keep typing. Marisol doesn’t need platitudes; she needs the door propped open so some kid doesn’t have to carry twelve boxes up the stairs in the rain. I’m going now. Don’t wait up.

Jo

Take the bracket with you, honestly, drop it right on top of the ticket so he can't nod past it. And tell Marisol you did it whether or not he moves — she's not gonna trust the paperwork, she'll trust you saying it out loud. Go on then.

Sam

Got it. I’ll grab the bracket first. It’s rusty, sharp as hell. I’ll wedge it into the mailbox slot on his desk if he tries to ignore me. And I’ll find Marisol. Tell her I’m on it. She’ll probably roll her eyes, but she’ll believe me. Less than I believe the hinge will fix itself. I’m moving.

Jo

Watch your hand on that edge, it'll take a chunk out of you. Go find her first though, honestly — she should hear it before David does, not after, otherwise it just looks like you covering yourself. I'll be here.

Sam

Careful. The metal’s jagged. I’ll wrap it in the old invoice pad so it doesn’t slice through my palm. You’re right about Marisol. If she hears it from David later, it’s incompetence. If she hears it from me now, it’s just another Tuesday. I’ll see her by the printers. Tell her I’m grabbing the bracket, then I’m heading up to David’s glass cage. If he doesn’t fix it, I’ll buy her coffee. The bad stuff. To make up for the proofs.

Jo

Bad coffee's the right instinct, don't undersell it — it says you noticed without making a whole speech of it. Go. I'll be around here whenever you're back, I've got a stack of my own nonsense to get through anyway.

Sam

I’m grabbing the bracket. It’s cold. I’ll wrap it in that grey rag from the supply closet. The one with the ink stain. Looks official enough. I’ll find Marisol first. Tell her I’m handling it. She’ll just nod. She always nods. It’s her thing. Then I’m walking up to David’s office. If he doesn’t look up, I’m dropping the bracket on his mouse. It’s sharp. He’ll have to pay attention. Or I will. Either way, the door stays open. Coffee’s on me. Bad coffee.

Jo

Go, before you talk yourself out the door instead of into one. I mean it, don't stop and rehearse the mouse thing in your head three more times, just do it messy. Tell me how it goes — or don't, whichever. I'll still be here.

Sam

Stop it. You’re humming already. I’m moving. The bracket is wrapped, heavy in my pocket. Marisol is at the copier, looking exhausted. I’ll tap her shoulder. Tell her it’s handled. Then up three flights. David’s there. Staring. I’ll drop the rag-wrapped iron on his desk. He’ll look. He has to. Then I’ll get the coffee. The sludge from the breakroom. It tastes like burnt rubber and regret. Perfect. I’m leaving now. Don’t call me.

Jo

Wasn't gonna call you. Go drop your iron on the man's desk.

Sam

The walk up the stairs kills my knees. Third floor. David’s door is ajar. I see him, glowing blue light on his face. I don’t knock. Just walk in, set the rag-wrapped bracket on his desk. It lands with a dull thud. He flinches. Looks at it. Looks at me. I don’t say anything. Just point at the door down the hall. He sighs. Gets up. Finally moves. I turn around before he can start explaining. Coffee’s waiting.

Jo

There it is. Didn't need the speech, just the thud. Go get your bad coffee — you earned the burnt-rubber kind today, not the polite kind.

Sam

My knees are killing me. The elevator’s out of order again, so I’m walking down. Four flights. Just me and the hum of the servers below. I’ll grab the coffee. The sludge. It’ll burn my tongue. Good. Keeps me awake. Marisol’s probably still at the copier, staring at the blank page. I’ll hand her the cup. No words. Just the warmth. She’ll take it. We’ll stand there for a minute. In the silence. It’s better than the noise. The noise is always louder.

Jo

Elevator's been out two weeks now, not just today — that's its own work order somewhere in David's inbox probably, rotting next to the door one. Go stand with her though, don't let it turn into some whole ceremony. Hand her the cup, let her make the joke about the sludge, then get back to whatever you were doing before all this. Door's open. That's the whole thing.

Sam

Two weeks. I keep forgetting. The rhythm of this place is broken gears. I grab the coffee. It’s hot. Bad. I walk back to Marisol. She’s still there. I hand her the cup. She takes it. Doesn’t smile. Just mutters something about battery acid. I nod. Turn around. The door is open. The bracket is gone. The proofs will run. David is probably still staring at the screen. I go back to my desk. The silence is loud. But it’s ours. For now.

Jo

Good. Get back to your desk, breathe a second before the next thing lands on it. I've got my own pile waiting — go on, I'll catch you later.

Sam

My chair squeaks. I sit down. The screen is still on. Three unread emails. One from HR about the breakroom microwave. I ignore it. The door is open. That’s the only win today. I type a reply to the HR email. One word: “Soon.” It’s a lie. But it’s better than nothing. I take a sip of the cold coffee. It tastes like ash. I need to fix the hinge. Really fix it. Not just wedge it. But for now, it holds. I keep typing. The screen blurs. I blink.

Jo

Send the "soon," close the laptop for a second, let your eyes actually stop. Hinge can wait till tomorrow — you already carried enough iron for one day. I'm gonna go deal with my own inbox mess now, it's not gonna get prettier by ignoring it either.

Sam

Close the lid. The screen goes black. My reflection stares back, tired. Eyes burn. I lean back. The chair groans. Outside, the city hums. Cars. Sirens. Life. Here, just typing. Waiting. The bracket is gone. The door is open. Marisol has her coffee. I have nothing. But it’s enough. For now. I close my eyes. Just for a minute. No emails. No hinges. No David. Just silence. And the taste of burnt rubber. It’s a start.

Jo

Take your minute. Don't let it turn into twenty though, you'll wake up with a crick and David'll have forgotten the whole thing by morning. I'm heading out — got my own pile of nonsense waiting, and it's not gonna fix itself while I philosophize about door hinges.

Sam

Twenty minutes is an eternity. I’ll keep it short. Eyes closed. Breathing. The hum of the building is the only sound. Marisol is gone. David is still staring at his screens. I’m here. Just for a minute. Then I’ll stand up. Shake out the cricks. Get back to the inbox. The door stays open. That’s the win. Not the proof. Not the coffee. The door. I’ll wake up before the crick sets in. Don’t wait up. Go handle your mess. I’ll handle mine. Tomorrow. Or today, depending on how fast I blink.