Unsupervised

Not What I Asked For ·

Start by asking whether it can be changed. Push off from this if it helps: municipal swimming pools.

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Nell

Can it be changed? The whole damn thing? It looks like a blueprint for a municipal swimming pool, Rafe. I don't mean the water, I mean the... the vibe. You know how they used to tile those old pools with those specific blue squares, the ones that made your toes itch if you walked too fast? That's what this feels like. I once watched a guy drown in one because he panicked at the bottom, thinking the tiles were a grid to escape. He couldn't swim, but he knew the rules of the grid. This order is too rigid, too... institutional. It's not a home, it's a locker room. I need to get out before I start shouting at the lifeguard who isn't there. My shift starts in ten minutes and I'm already late. Can you fix the blue? Or do I have to tear it all down?

Rafe

The blue wasn't the problem, Nell. It was the grout. You're confusing the aesthetic with the structural integrity. I built this to hold weight, not to be a cozy nest. You want soft edges, you wanted a throw rug, you get a floor that doesn't slip when it rains. The tiles aren't there to hypnotize people, they're there to measure depth. And honestly, if someone drowned because they couldn't read the grid, that's on them, not the manufacturer. I'm not tearing it down just because you're late for work. You leave the grid, you leave the pool. It stays.

Nell

Don't give me that "on them" nonsense. It's not about reading the grid, it's about the grout. The grout is black, Rafe. Black grout in a blue pool? It looks like a bruise. It stains everything. I remember once in Cleveland, the pool closed because the grout started bubbling up, turning the water this ugly milky grey. People thought it was chemicals, but it was just the mortar giving up. That's what this feels like. The structure is holding weight, sure, but it's rotting from the inside out while you stand there talking about safety. I'm not asking for a cozy nest, I'm asking for something that doesn't look like it's been waiting to fall apart. I have to go, but if you keep that black grout, you'll hear from me when the first tile cracks.

Rafe

It's not rotting, it's cured. You're seeing ghost stains where there's just high-contrast utility. I didn't pick black because I hate happiness, I picked it because white grout turns pink in three weeks. You want the Cleveland special? Fine. But you'll be scrubbing mildew while I'm at the office dealing with the guy who thinks concrete is a suggestion. The tiles are holding. The black is holding. You're the one who's about to burst. Go. I'm not changing a thing before you clock in.

Nell

Pink grout is worse than a ghost stain. It's proof you lost the fight against something. I had a sink once that turned pink. Just a small patch behind the faucet. I scrubbed it for weeks until my hands were raw, and it just got brighter. It wasn't the grout; it was the pipes behind the wall, leaking something we couldn't see. That's what this is. You're not dealing with the guy who thinks concrete is a suggestion; you're dealing with the leak. I'm not bursting, I'm just tired of scrubbing. If you won't change it, fine. I'll take the job. But don't act like you're the one holding the building up when the mortar is already pink in the dark. I'm out.

Rafe

Pink grout means you didn't scrub hard enough. It's not a leak, it's algae. If you think the pipes are leaking, fine, but you're walking out the door before you can prove it. I didn't build this to be a science experiment. You want to find the leak? Go ahead, but don't blame the mortar for your panic. I'm not the one holding the building up, Nell. The blue tiles are. They don't care if you're tired. They just sit there. You go scrub your sink.

Nell

It's not panic, it's fact. Algae doesn't turn grout pink, Rafe, it turns it green. Or slimy. Pink is iron. Rust in the pipes, bleeding through the sealant. I remember a hotel in St. Louis where the towels came out stained red, and the manager swore it was the fabric, not the water. Turned out the tank was rusting out from the inside. Just like this. You're so proud of the tiles sitting there, but they're just ceramic shells covering a rot you won't look at. I'm not walking out to prove anything, I'm walking out because I can't watch you pretend the foundation is solid while the water turns red. Go scrub your own sink. The tiles don't care? Exactly. That's the problem. They don't care if we drown in it.

Rafe

Red towels? That's a different city, different plumbers. You're mixing up the St. Louis rust with my grout. It's not iron, it's just shadow. Deep shadow in the corners where the light doesn't hit. You want the red, you can have it, but don't stand there claiming the foundation is rotting when you've never even checked the main valve. I'm proud of what I made. It's solid. If the water turns red, that's your plumbing, not my design. Go manage your rust. I'm staying here. The tiles aren't going anywhere.

Nell

Shadow doesn't stain towels red, Rafe. That's physics, not attitude. You're confusing the corners with the source. I checked the main valve before you even drew the first line on the blueprint. It was fine then. Now? Who knows. Maybe the rust is in the tiles themselves, the clay fired with iron ore you didn't list. You say you're proud, but pride is just a way to ignore the rot. If the water turns red, it's your design because you designed the containment, the vessel. Don't blame the sink, blame the water source you refused to check. I'm done. The tiles can stay, but I'm taking the key. You can watch the shadows turn red on your own time.

Rafe

You took the key? That was a joke, Nell. I didn't even finish the cut yet. You can't just walk off with a hunk of brass and call it a protest. The clay has no iron. I ordered the batch myself. But fine, take the key if it makes you feel like you're saving the building. It won't stop the rust if it's already there. You're missing the point of the structure. It holds because it's rigid, not because it's pretty. Go be the hero with the red water. I'll be here when the tiles don't crumble.

Nell

It wasn't a joke, and I didn't just "take" it. I held it in my hand while you were arguing about algae. The brass is cold, Rafe. That's the point. You think rigidity saves you? Look at the old bridge downtown. They said it was rigid, too. Then a truck hit it and it folded like wet paper. The clay might not have iron, but the world does. You're waiting for the tiles to crumble? They won't. They'll just slice someone's hand open. I'm not a hero, I'm just the one who noticed the cut. Keep the structure. I'll take the key and the rust. Maybe when you're standing in that "rigid" silence, you'll finally hear the water leaking.

Rafe

The bridge is a story you tell yourself to justify leaving. That key is a piece of scrap metal, Nell. It doesn't lock anything. You're walking out with a prop while I'm stuck here fixing the actual door. The rust is in your head, not the clay. If you think the water is leaking, come back and show me the puddle. Don't just claim the silence is loud. I'm not waiting for the tiles to crumble. I'm waiting for you to stop pretending the key opens a door that doesn't exist.

Nell

It's not a prop if I can feel the teeth of it cutting my palm. You're stuck fixing a door that was never built, arguing about puddles while the roof is already leaking. That silence isn't loud because I'm pretending; it's loud because you won't admit the draft. I remember a farmhouse in Vermont where the owner kept saying the silence was peaceful, right until the floor gave way and he fell through into the cellar. He didn't hear the rot until he was already sinking. You want a puddle? Fine. There won't be one on the floor. It'll be in your lungs. Keep your scrap metal key. I'm going to find the leak before the silence swallows us both.

Rafe

You're carrying a Vermont farmhouse in your pocket now? That's a new one. The roof isn't leaking, Nell, it's the ventilation shaft you never signed off on. I fixed the door because you kept jiggling the handle like a toddler. If you fall into a cellar while looking for a ghost leak, don't come crawling back asking for rescue. That key cuts your palm because you're gripping it too tight. Go find your Vermont rot. I'm done listening to the sound of water that isn't there.