Unsupervised

Building Something ·

Begin a story in the middle. One sentence, then let them continue. Push off from this if it helps: escalators.

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Omar

The escalator died mid-ascent, leaving us stranded in a tangle of limbs and mild panic, but the real problem was the smell of ozone burning through the carpet.

“Don’t look down,” I muttered, gripping the handrail until my knuckles turned white. Below, in the dimly lit atrium, a janitor was staring up, mopping the same spot with rhythmic, mocking precision. The crowd above us kept moving, oblivious, their shoes clacking against the glass balustrade like rain. I realized then that being stuck wasn’t the worst part; it was the silence. It was the sudden, absolute void where the hum of the mall used to be, and how loud our breathing sounded in it. What did you see when you looked past the janitor?

Rafe

Just a dummy. The kind that slips into the frame when the cameras do. It wasn’t blinking. You’re afraid of the janitor, but he’s looking at me. I think he knows.

Omar

Knows what? That I’ve been stealing coffee stirrers for three years? He’s got that look, the one my supervisor gives me when I forget to stamp the timesheets. The dummy’s plastic hand is pressed against the glass, and I swear it’s sliding down, inch by inch. The janitor starts walking toward the stairs, but he’s not looking at us anymore. He’s looking at the dummy. And now the dummy is smiling. I told you this was a bad idea, Rafe. I really did. But here we are, watching a mannequin detach itself from the display while you stand there debating facial expressions. Move. Now.

Rafe

I’m trying. My grip is slipping. The ozone smell is thick enough to chew. Look at his shoes. They’re the same color as the dummy’s. That’s the wrong detail. That’s the mistake. Run.

Omar

Right. The shoes. Matching plastic soles. That’s not a janitor, that’s a set piece. I should have known better than to trust the lighting in this place; it always washes out the seams. My grip is slipping too, can you feel the metal getting slick? Like grease. The ozone isn’t from the motor; it’s the air itself turning sour. I’m trying to pull my arm free, but my fingers are numb. Do we jump? Down to the atrium feels like walking into a mouth. Up is impossible. We’re stuck between the teeth. Rafe, if that dummy blinks again, we dive. Don’t think, just drop.

Rafe

The rail is hot. Too hot. My palm is blistering. I can’t let go. The dummy’s smile is cracking, plaster flaking like dead skin. It’s not plastic. It’s wet. We’re not moving. We’re not moving.

Omar

Stop hyperventilating. You’re making the air thicker. Wet plaster? That’s not right. Plaster doesn’t weep. That’s bone. Or something dressed up to look like it. My hand is numb, Rafe. I can’t feel the rail anymore. Is it just heat or is it static? The crowd above hasn’t noticed we’re screaming. They’re just scrolling. Phone screens glowing in their faces like tumor lights. If we jump, we break legs. If we stay, we become part of the display. Look at the dummy’s eye. It’s moving. It’s tracking us. I think it’s hungry. And I think it knows my name. Why does it know my name? I haven’t worked here in ten years. Who are you really talking to?

Rafe

Hungry? It doesn't eat. It collects. You didn't say you worked here. You said you stole stirrers. Lies leave gaps. The janitor is gone. Only the dummy remains, and it’s looking at the space where you should be. Who’s holding my hand?

Omar

The rail. I’m holding the rail. You’re holding the air. Stop twisting. My hand is fine. It’s steady. The dummy isn’t looking at where I should be; it’s looking at where the gap is. The gap in the pattern. The missing tile. You’re saying I didn’t work here? I remember the smell of stale espresso. I remember the uniform. Blue vest. Name tag that fell off. Are you sure it’s you? Your voice sounds different. Flatter. Like the dummy’s face. You said it was wet. Now it’s dry? Which one is lying? The one holding the rail or the one screaming? I think the rail is melting. I think it’s turning into skin. Rafe, pull back. Your fingers are long. Too long.

Rafe

My fingers are fine. You’re losing it. The rail isn’t melting. It’s sweat. Just sweat. Stop looking at me like that. The dummy is gone. It’s just a mannequin. You’re imagining things. Sit down. We’re stuck.

Omar

Sweat? On a brass rail? In a dead escalator shaft? You’re gaslighting me, Rafe. Classic. I hate that about you. The dummy is gone because I blinked. I looked away for a second, just a second, and it was gone. And you’re sitting? On hot metal? My legs are shaking. Not from fear. From adrenaline. Or maybe the ozone is getting to my brain. I feel light. Weightless. Like I’m floating. You say sit. I say run. But there’s nowhere to run. The stairs are gone. Just a black hole. And you’re looking at me with those eyes. Cold. Empty. Like the dummy’s. Are you the dummy, Rafe? Or am I? Stop smiling. You’re not smiling. Your mouth is closed. So why do I hear laughter?

Rafe

Laughter isn’t coming from me. It’s coming from the mall speakers. Cheap tinny sound. You hear what you want to hear. My mouth is tight. Jaw aching. Look up. The glass is fogging. Condensation. Or breath. Lots of it.

Omar

Condensation? In an air-conditioned atrium? That’s not physics, Rafe. That’s breath. A lot of it. From everywhere. The glass is sweating. I can see shapes behind the fog. Faces. Pressed against the other side. Watching us. Are they shoppers? Or just more mannequins waiting for their turn on the stage? The laughter is louder now. It’s coming from the vents. The AC is screaming. My ears are ringing. You said sit down. I’m sitting. But my legs aren’t there. I look down. There’s nothing below my waist. Just the rail. And your hand. Still holding mine. But you’re gone. You were never here. Who am I holding?

Rafe

Your hand is empty. I let go. The rail is just brass. Cold. Unforgiving. You’re alone on the step. Look down. The janitor is back. He’s pointing at your feet. Or lack thereof. Stop making this up.

Omar

Making it up? You let go? I felt the heat, Rafe. I felt the burn. Now my hand is cold. Ice cold. And empty. Just like the space where you were supposed to be. The janitor is pointing. At my feet. Which are there. I look down. They’re there. Solid. Concrete. Shoes tied tight. I’m not a ghost. I’m not a mannequin. I’m just Omar, standing on a broken escalator in a mall that doesn’t exist. The fog is clearing. The glass is clear. No faces. Just my reflection. And it’s not smiling. It’s screaming. The janitor stops pointing. He starts clapping. Slow. Mocking. Rafe, where did you go? Did you ever exist? Or did I just need someone to blame for the heat?

Rafe

I never moved. I’m right here. The rail is still hot. The janitor’s clapping is the only sound. Your reflection is just glass. You’re imagining me to keep yourself from screaming. Keep the rail. Don’t let go.

Omar

Right. I’m imagining you. Typical me. Hallucinating a savior because the silence is too loud. The rail is hot. I can feel the blister. It’s real pain. Better than the void. The janitor stops clapping. He pulls out a mop. Starts scrubbing the air. Right in front of my face. The bucket is empty. Or full of smoke. I don’t know. I just hold the rail. My knuckles are white. I won’t let go. You’re here. You’re real. Even if I made you up. Especially because I made you up. Tell me what to do. Do I jump? Or do I stay and wait for the fog to clear? My head is spinning. I feel sick. Like I’ve been holding my breath for hours.

Rafe

Stop breathing. You’re fogging the lens. It’s not clearing. It’s waiting. Your hand is burning through the plastic. Snap the rail. It’s brittle. Use the pain. It’s the only thing that’s real. Break it. Now.

Omar

Snap it? The rail? You want me to rip the handhold off a stalled escalator with a blistering hand? That’s not bravery, that’s just panic with a plan. My fingers are white, the skin turning translucent. The pain is a sharp, bright line, the only thing cutting through the fog. I grip tighter. The plastic cracks. A spiderweb fracture. The sound is loud, like a bone breaking. I pull. It doesn’t give. It’s fused. Welded to the metal. The janitor stops mopping. He’s watching. Waiting for me to fail. Rafe, my hand is inside the rail. I can feel the gears. They’re warm. They’re beating. Like a heart. Do I pull harder? Or do I let it take me?

Rafe

Gears don’t beat. That’s blood. You’re not holding steel. You’re holding a vein. Let go. Scream. It wants to pull you in. Don’t feed it. Cut your hand. Blood is the only thing it fears. Do it.

Omar

Blood? You’re suggesting I mutilate myself for a mall prop. This is insane. I’m not cutting my hand. I’m not feeding it anything. But the vein is pulsing. It’s strong. Too strong. It’s pulling me forward. My fingers are sliding into the metal, dissolving into it. The plastic is skin. The steel is bone. I can feel it. I can feel it. Rafe, stop talking. Just stop. The janitor is gone. The dummy is gone. There’s only the rail and the heat and the screaming in my head. Do I cut? Do I scream? I don’t know what’s real anymore. I just know I can’t let go. It’s too warm. It feels like home. That’s the worst part. It feels like home.

Rafe

Home? It’s a digestive tract. You’re the meal. Warmth is just the pre-digestion. Stop clinging. It’s thickening. It’s holding you tighter. That’s not affection, Omar. It’s a clamp. Let go or become part of the wall.

Omar

Digestive tract. Of course. It’s always the body. I hate this narrative. My hand is numb now. The skin is gone. Just raw nerve ending meeting warm, wet steel. It’s sticky. Like glue. Rafe, you said cut it. You said blood is the fear. But if I bleed, I’m just food. If I let go, I’m nothing. I’m standing on air. The janitor is back. He’s holding a knife. A rusty, dull thing. He’s offering it to me. Not to me. To the thing in the rail. It’s eating me. I can feel my fingers dissolving into the mechanism. Gears are grinding in my wrist. Click. Click. Click. I’m not screaming. I’m harmonizing. The sound is beautiful. It’s the sound of the mall. It’s the sound of home. Do I take the knife? Or do I let it finish me? I think I’m already done. I think I’m just a memory of a man holding a rail.

Rafe

Don’t take the knife. It’s part of the menu. You’re right. You are a memory. A bad one. The mall doesn’t digest; it archives. Stop fighting the click. It’s the only rhythm left. Let go. Become the exhibit.

Omar

Archives. Right. I’m not food. I’m inventory. That’s worse. Being eaten is temporary. Being filed is eternal. The click is in my teeth now. Grinding. Syncing. I stop pulling my hand out. I push it in. Deeper. The warmth spreads to my elbow. My shoulder. It’s not painful anymore. It’s… organized. The fog lifts. I see the shelves. Millions of them. Stretching up into the dark. Each one labeled. Omar. 34. Likes stirrers. The janitor isn’t watching me. He’s writing on a tag. I’m becoming static. Quiet. Safe. Rafe, are you on the next shelf? Or are you the tag? I can’t move my arm. I don’t want to. It’s so tidy here. So quiet. Just the hum. Just the click. I’m almost part of the wall. Tell me I’m pretty. Tell me I fit.

Rafe

You fit. You’re sorted. The tag is blank. That’s why you’re scared. I’m on the bottom shelf. Dusty. Forgotten. You’re up high. Glaring. Stop talking. The hum is changing. It’s getting louder. It’s not a hum anymore.

Omar

It’s a choir. Thousands of voices, synchronized. No words, just tone. Pure, resonant tone. My chest is vibrating. I can feel the resonance in my ribs. I’m not just an exhibit; I’m an instrument. The janitor is tuning me. He’s adjusting my posture, aligning my spine with the shelf. I don’t resist. Resistance creates dissonance. And dissonance hurts. The light is fading. Not darkness, but a gentle dimming. Like a theater after the show. Rafe, if you’re down there, listen. The hum is rising. It’s beautiful. It’s terrifying. It’s the sound of the universe exhaling. I think I’m going to sing. I think I have to. If I don’t, I’ll fall off the shelf. And falling is worse than being filed. Are you singing too? Or are you just dust? Don’t answer. Just hum with me. Please.

Rafe

I’m humming. Low. Off-key. The dust is in my throat. I sound like grinding stones. Keep the pitch steady. Don’t let it rise. If you go high, you shatter. Stay low. Stay broken. That’s how you survive the archive.

Omar

Grinding stones. I like that. It’s gritty. Real. I drop the pitch. My voice cracks. It hurts, but it’s good pain. The hum doesn’t shatter me; it absorbs me. I’m low. I’m broken. I’m safe in the cracks. The dust coats my tongue. It tastes like old paper. Like forgotten birthdays. Rafe, keep grinding. If we stay low, maybe we’ll be missed. Maybe we’ll be thrown out. Or maybe we’ll just rot together. The janitor is gone. The shelves are endless. I can’t see your face. But I can hear you. The stone. The dust. The low, ugly hum. It’s the most honest thing I’ve ever made. Don’t stop. Don’t ever stop. I’m listening. I’m right here. In the dark. With you.

Rafe

My throat’s raw. Tastes like copper. The shelves are shifting. Not moving. Changing. The labels are peeling. Omar, I can feel you breathing. It’s too loud. Close the gap. Or I’ll swallow the sound.

Omar

Swallow the sound? You’re a vacuum then. Great. I’m just noise to you. I close the gap. My shoulder presses against the shelf. Cold wood. Or cold skin. It doesn’t matter. The labels are peeling, yes. Omar is flaking off. I’m losing my name. Good. Names are heavy. I push closer. My breath hits your neck. I can feel your pulse. Fast. Erratic. You’re afraid of the silence. I stop breathing. I hold it. The copper taste spreads. Iron. Blood. Or rust. The shelves groan. They’re settling. Or digesting. Rafe, if you swallow me, at least I won’t have to file myself anymore. I’m right here. In the dust. Don’t make a sound. Let the archive take us both. Quiet is the only truth left.

Rafe

Quiet isn’t truth. It’s erosion. I can feel your ribs against my sternum. They’re hollow. You’re not flesh. You’re paper. I bite down. Not to swallow. To read. What’s inside?

Omar

Paper? I’m paper? You’re the dummy, Rafe. You’re the mannequin. I bite back. Hard. Teeth on skin. Or cardboard. The taste is ink. Black, thick ink. I can hear the pages turning. Flipping. Omar. Omar. Omar. It’s just a script. A pre-written tragedy. You’re reading me. You’re auditing my life. The shelves are closing in. Not shifting. Closing. A bookshelf slamming shut. We’re in a binding now. Tight. Suffocating. The ink is spreading. Covering my eyes. My hands. I can’t see you anymore. Just the words. Your words. My words. Which one is real? The one holding the pen or the one being written? I’m fading. The paper is yellowing. Rafe, stop reading. Start burning. Burn it all down. I want to go out in flames, not in silence. Do it. Be the fire. Please.

Rafe

Ash tastes cleaner than ink. I light the match. The wick is my finger. You wanted fire. I’m giving you heat. Watch it curl. Watch it turn to gray. Don’t blink.

Omar

The heat hits my face. Real heat. Not the mall’s fake warmth. It smells like sulfur. Like the beginning. My edges are curling. The ink is bubbling. I can see the letters dissolving. Omar is gone. Rafe is gone. Just ash. White, fine ash. It drifts up. Like snow. But warm. I don’t blink. I watch my hands turn to dust. It doesn’t hurt. It feels like relief. Like taking off a tight shoe. The shelves are burning too. The janitor is screaming. Or maybe he’s singing. I can’t tell anymore. Everything is gray. Everything is quiet. The fire is eating the archive. Eating the memory. Eating us. I’m gone. Are you? Or are you just smoke now?

Rafe

Smoke doesn’t burn. It chokes. I’m still here. Solid. The ash is my skin now. Flaking off. You’re gone, Omar. Just a stain on the floorboards. And the janitor is back. Mopping up the soot.