Gil
Why does fog taste like metal? I’m standing in it right now, near the reservoir, and my tongue feels like it’s been filed. It’s not just cold. It’s a texture. Like sucking on a penny. Weird, right?
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Vic
It’s not the cold. It’s the dust.
I was fixing the heating in the basement last week, and the air tasted like burnt pennies. Just a faint, coppery hum. I think the fog is picking up the residue from the pipes. Or maybe it’s the algae dying.
When you say it feels filed, I imagine your tongue is trying to scrub something off. Like a coin that’s been in a pocket too long.
Do you smell it too? Or is it just that gritty, electric feeling? I’d worry about the water, but I guess you’re just standing there. It’s a strange place to be.
Gil
I’m not standing there. I’m at my desk, staring at a spreadsheet that makes my eyes bleed.
Burnt pennies? That’s just rust. Old copper oxidizing. It’s not a mystery, Vic, it’s plumbing.
It’s not gritty. It’s just wet. Wet and heavy. Like breathing through a wet towel.
Stop romanticizing the rot.
Vic
You’re right. It’s plumbing. I like the idea of it being a ghost, though. A ghost of a coin.
If it’s just wet, then it’s heavy because it’s full of things. Tiny things. Like silt.
Your eyes bleeding sounds worse. Is the light bad? I hate screens. They feel like they’re sucking the moisture out of the room. Like a sponge.
Are you working on the numbers for the new intake? Or is it just the daily grind? I got a call about a leak in the east wing. Just a drip. But it sounds like it’s coming from inside the wall.
Gil
It’s the quarterly audit. Numbers that lie to each other.
The light is fine. My retinas are just tired.
If it’s in the wall, it’s not a ghost. It’s a pipe. Or a rat.
Fix the leak. Don’t name it.
Vic
Rats are easier to blame. They have eyes. Pipes don’t.
I’m looking at the wall now. It’s just wet. There is no smell. Just the dampness. It feels like the house is sweating.
Your numbers. If they lie to each other, maybe they’re just telling the truth in a different language. I don’t know. I just look at the water stain and think it looks like a map of somewhere I’ve never been.
I’m going to go get a towel. Do you want me to bring you a coffee? It’s probably cold.
Gil
No coffee. I have a thermos. It’s lukewarm and tastes like the bottom of the kettle.
Don’t map it. Wipe it.
If it’s a map, it’s a terrible one. Just water.
I’m going to stare at this cell until it confesses.
Vic
A cell is a prison. Confessions are rare there.
I’m wiping it. The water is dark. It leaves a mark on the white cloth. It looks like a bruise.
Your thermos. The bottom of the kettle is where the heat lives. It’s just settled there.
If you stare long enough, the numbers might blur. That’s not a confession. That’s just your eyes giving up. I think that’s the only honest thing in the room right now.
Gil
Bruises don’t care about maps.
My eyes aren’t giving up. I’m just tired.
Don’t make it profound. It’s a stain.
I’m closing the laptop.
Vic
I’m done wiping. The cloth is ruined.
Good. A stain is just history. It stays.
Close the laptop. The numbers will wait. They’re patient. Rats are patient. Pipes are patient.
I’m going to put the cloth in the bin. It smells like the wall now.
Gil
The numbers won’t wait. They’ll be there tomorrow, angry.
The cloth smells like wet plaster and old copper.
Burn it. Bins aren’t for that.
I’m done here.
Vic
I’ll burn it. The smoke will smell like the wall.
Angry numbers. That sounds exhausting. I hope they sleep tonight.
I’m going to open a window. The air inside feels too thick. Like soup.